Too Close to Holmes - 11/?

[lindor1306]

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10

Chapter 11 - Returning

Sherlock's return to Baker Street was not, unfortunately, uneventful.  He stepped slowly out of the taxi, grudgingly accepting the assistance offered by John and Mycroft, and walked with pained, uneven steps up the stairs to 221b.

Comments

[fantomeq]

Oh that was painful (in a good, well-written way). Poor Sherlock. I wonder where he's going. Looking forward to the next part.

[lindor1306]

Yeah... I have the next part in my mind. Just trying to decide whether to keep going on a downwards spiral of depression or move Sherlock on through the stages of grief. Both options very fun!

[madameangel]

This. Is. Amazing. I only wish your chapters were longer! A-freaking-ma-zing. Wow.

[lindor1306]

Yeah. I'm not terribly good at long chapters. I prefer to keep each significant event neatly boxed off in it's own little chapter. I will work on it though. This was a particularly short chapter because I was having trouble getting back into it after starting a new job!

[johnnypenn]

Sherlock is such a wanker.