Wow, thank you so much! You have no idea how much I enjoyed this comment. I'm delighted that you're enjoying the story so much, and I promise I'm hard at work on the next chapter, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long.
I think plums4peace nailed everything, so I just wanted to add that “I haven’t kidnapped her,” Branson replied, frowning. “We’ve eloped. Tell them, Sybil.” was my absolute favorite part.
Thanks! I think that, although most of Sybil and Branson's interactions on the show have been quite serious and sincere, there's a lot of opportunity for some light comedy between them that we've missed out on, so I'm trying to throw that dynamic in whenever I can. I liked that bit as well, so it's nice to know someone else enjoyed it. :)
I love this! I think I saw the first chapter back when you first posted it, but I don't know if I ever actually read it. But I just read all three chapters & I think it's great - I love both Sybil and Branson's voices.
You are a genius, and I can just agree with everything plums said above. And then I'll just camp out here, pressing F5 until you post again, being on tenterhooks doesn't even cover it!
Oh my goodness! In that case I'd better hop to. :) Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully it won't be too long of a wait for the next part, although I admit I'm by no means the world's fastest writer. I'll do my best!
Just wanted to post a note about how much I am enjoying this story. As others have said, you've corrected a lot of mistakes/sloppy writing on teh part of the writers. Looking forward to the next installment!
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. I'll hopefully have something more for you soon - I've been suffering major writer's block for a couple of months now. But I haven't given up, I promise. :)
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Seriously - thanks. :)
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Can't wait for parts 4 & 5!
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