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plums4peace January 3 2012, 21:00:01 UTC
YAY NEW CHAPTER ( ... )

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lindentree January 7 2012, 17:47:02 UTC
Wow, thank you so much! You have no idea how much I enjoyed this comment. I'm delighted that you're enjoying the story so much, and I promise I'm hard at work on the next chapter, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long.

Seriously - thanks. :)

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thewindwarns January 4 2012, 05:04:03 UTC
I think plums4peace nailed everything, so I just wanted to add that “I haven’t kidnapped her,” Branson replied, frowning. “We’ve eloped. Tell them, Sybil.” was my absolute favorite part.

Can't wait for parts 4 & 5!

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lindentree January 7 2012, 17:50:17 UTC
Thanks! I think that, although most of Sybil and Branson's interactions on the show have been quite serious and sincere, there's a lot of opportunity for some light comedy between them that we've missed out on, so I'm trying to throw that dynamic in whenever I can. I liked that bit as well, so it's nice to know someone else enjoyed it. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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theepiccek January 4 2012, 10:21:25 UTC
I love this! I think I saw the first chapter back when you first posted it, but I don't know if I ever actually read it. But I just read all three chapters & I think it's great - I love both Sybil and Branson's voices.

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lindentree January 7 2012, 17:50:38 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

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cytherae January 6 2012, 20:25:00 UTC
You are a genius, and I can just agree with everything plums said above. And then I'll just camp out here, pressing F5 until you post again, being on tenterhooks doesn't even cover it!

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lindentree January 7 2012, 17:51:27 UTC
Oh my goodness! In that case I'd better hop to. :) Glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully it won't be too long of a wait for the next part, although I admit I'm by no means the world's fastest writer. I'll do my best!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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anonymous February 29 2012, 00:06:04 UTC
Just wanted to post a note about how much I am enjoying this story. As others have said, you've corrected a lot of mistakes/sloppy writing on teh part of the writers. Looking forward to the next installment!

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lindentree March 3 2012, 16:14:50 UTC
Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. I'll hopefully have something more for you soon - I've been suffering major writer's block for a couple of months now. But I haven't given up, I promise. :)

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