Lewis fic: To be his

[lindenharp]

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[cricri_72]

I can absolutely see this.

And although I would've wanted to read on, this was the perfect moment to stop.

[lindenharp]

Thanks. There probably will be more,but this is where the Muse stopped speaking. My current priority is to finish the wing!fic. After that, I'll see.

[hebejebe]

great James POV, and a lovely, tender, realistic, and revealing evening in bed :)

typo nitpick: 3rd paragraph, 'robably never will be'.

the last paragraph is beautiful; the last sentence pretty much encapsulates my view on why Hathaway would be in love with Lewis in the first place.

[lindenharp]

Thank you. I'm glad that paragraph worked for you; it summarises how I see them as a couple.

[tehomet]

Surprisingly touching and poignant. Thanks for posting.

[lindenharp]

Surprisingly? May I ask why?

Thank for reading and commenting. :-)

[tehomet]

Oh, just because I usually skip fic with the BDSM tag as, long story short, in RL I have certain ideological objections to it, but to be frank, I have trouble resisting your writing. :)

[lindenharp]

*blushes* Thank you, indeed.

[dreamingjewel]

I'm getting more of a d/s vibe from Hathaway in this story. Will there be more? I really like what you have written,so far.

[lindenharp]

D/s would best describe the relationship that James desires. I used BDSM as a tag because it's the umbrella term, and recognizable to the average reader.

There will be more, if only because I want to read it.