I think I'm Paranoid Chapter 2/?

Jul 27, 2006 20:28

Beta: Lissa_bear thank you I agreed with all your suggestions muchly ( Read more... )

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becisvolatile July 29 2006, 02:14:07 UTC
Squeee!
Ok, so special points go to these bits:

Michael will most likely come around beforehand, "coincidentally" as he usually does...

"Stud, you guessed right,"

It only got difficult when God started to make Sara pay for everything she had.

*happy sigh* Have I mentioned how hot pre-series Linc/Sara is?

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winterqueen July 29 2006, 17:03:01 UTC
Thanks for commenting :D. Seriously, it was your writing that got me into this pairing.

Its strange for me to write continuing het stuff, but I sense the next chapter of this could get a bit hotter because its right and how long can Lincoln resist Sara....

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becisvolatile July 29 2006, 23:33:02 UTC
*is flattered* It's nice to see someone else writing pre-series stuff. It is by far my fave.

And Lincoln resisting Sara? Not that long. Poor boy doesn't know what he's in for.

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thelana August 1 2006, 11:02:01 UTC
I liked it. Thought it was a lot of fun. I really dig how you drew Sara. Like:

Sara has never yet been wrong about guessing which frogs to kiss and which she should just experiment on. Figuring out who she needs to exploit and the best method for doing so is a Tancredi trait. She is her father's daughter after all.

And:

Slow and deliberate works best in Sara's experience. It tells her that he has just enough muscle to do the job she needs.

She is going to kiss him and then she'll be sure of her diagnosis.

Cool way of using Sara's doctor language.

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winterqueen August 6 2006, 15:20:45 UTC
Thanks for commenting :D I always find your feedback interesting.

I think I have a better take on Sara than on Lincoln. I think it is because I understand how the character ticks better!

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