fic, narnia, edmund

[liminalliz]

Title: Poor Jerusalem
Fandom: The Chronicles of Narnia
Summary: Prince Caspian AU (movieverse); The battle at Aslan’s How takes a wrong turn when Aslan doesn’t show up and the trees remain asleep

Comments

Ouch

[puffles24]

Oh, ouch. What with Jadis and the Tis and the chair and Ed and Peter and his apple tree and the general hurtyness. *wibbles* Can we have the kittens now?

This is my first LJ Narnia fic, and it was a wonderful but somewhat depressing way to start. I'm off to laugh at some Sues to make myself feel better. Great story, by the way.

Re: Ouch

[liminalliz]

Thank you, thank you! :) It was quite an experience to write; I HATED DOING BAD THINGS TO CHARACTER I LOVE SO MUCH, OH NARNIAN BOYFRIENDS.

Glad you liked! :)

[kattahj]

This was dark in a very believable way, and I was mesmerized.

[liminalliz]

Thanks!!! So glad you liked it.

[sgriobadh]

Wow, fantastic.

[liminalliz]

Thank you!! <33

[notexotic]

Okay, like two months late, but: HOLY SHIT AMAZING. I looooove seeing the Pevensies in these impossible situations and how they cope because they're FAMILY. Ahhh!

There needs to be more Edmund/Jadis fic, tbh.

[alixtii]

That's great. You draw all the elements together in a different way to create a vivid AU. I especially love Eustace and Jill (or two other kids taking their place) at the end.