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Beating [Faster, Faster]

May 20, 2007 04:04

Title: Beating [Faster, Faster]
Author: Telis (theaerosolkid)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan, William/Spencer, Panic! GSF, implied William/Ryan/Pete/Spencer, implied Ryan/Spencer
Summary: Part of the cultverse -- cultverse. Direct follow-up to Fire On Your Tongue; Spencer sees the light, and is needed.
Word Count: 5496
Disclaimer: Fake, fake, fake.
A/N: ( Read more... )

cultverse, brendon/ryan, panic! gsf, william/spencer, nc-17

Comments 57

frequencies May 20 2007, 11:29:27 UTC

God, this is so creepy and well-written and really just amazing. Ngh. Will say things of more substance later, promise. ♥

frequencies May 21 2007, 03:23:23 UTC

Okay, okay. So.

Ryan and Brendon were on a sort of wavelength that Spencer couldn't see, they were coming up ultra-violet, burning and crisping when you least expect it, they always understood each other better than they had any right to, but now it was. Something different. Now they were more intense, talking in hushed voices. That must be how it is, cult or no cult. Sometimes I think the weirdest part about the cultverse is that it's not as creepy as it should be, and it almost kind of makes sense, and. Yeah, it's weird.

I love Brendon's hostility, and then the acceptance, later. And my God, the William and Spencer, because I've never seen that done before and WHY NOT?! Pete and Ryan in the front seat the whole time [symbolism!!!], and It's just Brendon and Ryan now, Spencer and Jon have faded to background noise, this is what Brendon really needs, he needs them to keep him grounded and sure of himself so he can focus on Ryan, and Spencer feels wildly grateful, that he's allowed to observe this, that he's allowed to help them, ( ... )

theaerosolkid May 22 2007, 01:00:46 UTC

Symbolism!! Whee.

I'm glad you liked this. I adore writing cultverse, partially because it allows you to be so much more...intense? when you're describing relationships and feelings. Eeheehee. Thanks again, love ♥

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theaerosolkid May 22 2007, 01:02:00 UTC

\o/

I'm glad you liked it! Everything I write is in some way Brendon/Ryan :P even the stuff that isn't, technically. It IS. They are my OTP and I love them best when I get to do crazy off-the-wall things to them, making cultverse kind of my special AU teddybear. *cuddles*

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theaerosolkid May 22 2007, 01:03:15 UTC

I'm so thrilled that you like both pieces I've written -- it's nice to know I'm not pissing on your AU ;)

I'm really glad that everything I was trying to say came through so clearly. Thanks for the comment, and for getting this all going :)

jae_w May 20 2007, 15:35:04 UTC

Oh, I really liked this, especially Spencer's point of view throughout, and the scene with him and William. So well done!

theaerosolkid May 22 2007, 01:03:55 UTC

Thanks!! Spencer is my kryptonite. I usually suck at writing him, so whenever I get insight it's \o/ smilies for a month.

magdalyna May 20 2007, 15:45:25 UTC

Shivery and creepy and so very good.

I love Spencer in this. How he trusts Ryan, how he observes the things happening around him, his interactions with Jon.

This is amazing and fantatsic.

theaerosolkid May 22 2007, 01:04:11 UTC

:D Yay Spencer!!

Thanks!

magdalyna May 22 2007, 02:16:29 UTC

Welcome.

Your early Spencer and then his time with William in the back of the van especially gets me. That he goes all or nothing inot soemthing, with whatever it is. That Will was able to use Spencer's insecurities against him like that, that Ryan and Pete were there with them.

And then converted!Spencer tryinging to keep things together. And Jon and Spencer first meeting.

This was excellant.