Hazard Pay, Part 16

[lilymoon1]

Hazard Pay
Part 16
Fandom: Final Fantasy VII, Advent Children
Pairing: main Reno/Cloud
Rating: NC-17 overall
Spoilers: references to events in the movie
Warnings: yaoi
Disclaimer: owned by Square Enix, not me.
A/N: all previous parts can be found in my memories.

Comments

[keibungaku]

Yay! New chapter!

I really liked the interaction between Vincent and Cloud, and the reflection into Cloud's character.

The humor in this chapter is really well done, as well. ^_^

[lilymoon1]

Thanks! I think Cloud looks up to Vincent a lot.

[lilymoon1]

LoL, I post anywhere I can put it. I'm always happy to hear someone is enjoying my scribbles.

[chocobolight]

Ha, Reno's an idiot...like we didn't know that already. I'm still a little put off by the whole Rude/Vincent thing but part of me likes the 'two pairs of lovers' thing. Maybe its because I have this undying hatred for Rude. I WISH I could like him...I just can't. Oh well, and I KNOW you are sick of hearing this but its like some kind of commenting tradition now....I really love your whales....and your story!

[lilymoon1]

:gasp: You don't like Rude??

I never get tired of hearing about the pretty whales. I wish I could find a manatee layout. I think they are even more precious.

[xchristabelx]

Aaaw. Cute. Loved it. Yay for all the human emotions. Post more soon. ;)

[lilymoon1]

Even the tough guys have some hidden emotions and feelings. You just have to draw them out.

[encaged]

I'd been reading this story all weekend and hadn't had an opportune chance to leave a comment until now. I was so glad to read part 16 this afternoon! ^^ The believability of all of the characters is so wonderful, and the caring between Reno and Cloud is absolutely touching. I can't wait to see them all in fighting action in upcoming scenes.

Also...do you mind that I added you to watch for future writings?

[lilymoon1]

I don't mind at all. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.