Night Moves (Jack/Daniel) NC-17

[lilyleia78]

Title: Night Moves
Fandom: SG-1
Pairing: Jack/Daniel
Genre: First time, romance, pwp
Warnings: None that I'm aware of
Word Count: 2503
Summary: In a shared tent offworld, Daniel makes a move.
Note: For tejas in the jd_ficathon. I kept thinking it was going to grow some plot, but it never happened. Appropriately enough, tejas once told me that sometimes we just have

Comments

[tresa_cho]

Oh my. *fans self* That was delicious!

[lilyleia78]

^_^ Thanks!

[rivulet027]

Wow. Loved it! Poor jealous Jack and then it turning into them admitting they love each other. :)

[lilyleia78]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[magnavox_23]

Very sweet, and poor Daniel - there's a girl on every planet!

[lilyleia78]

hee! I'd volunteer to be the girl on this planet if I didn't think Jack would have me killed. :) Thanks.

[antares04a]

Oh, this is hot! I like it that it begins with Jack not being sure if it is a (half-)dream or not. But Daniel has not problems to make him see that being awake for what happens now is much better. I like the tenderness and the hotness of the love scene very much!

[lilyleia78]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the mix of hot and sweet.

[serpentine85]

♥ Love it lots! ♥ The mood you've opened with establishes the emotional connection perfectly, and echoes of it through the rest of the fic maintain that connection (without getting in the way of the fun stuff♥) so it makes the closing lines resonate beautifully.

[lilyleia78]

Oh, thank you so much for that. I was really trying to give it more depth than just outright porn. I'm so glad that it came across that way for you. ♥ :)