LJ Idol: Week 24

[lilyinchains]

Topic: Bats in the Belfry

My power lies where? Anywhere I put it, right? I can give it to a man, a woman, to a job, to a god, to you...my power is mine to give and sometimes mine to take back. I lost my power once, to someone who took it when my eyes were closed, when I was dreaming of what could be, not what was. I didn't realize it was

Comments

[theafaye]

It's funny how much we justify to ourselves mistakes we made rather than draw a line and move on. I know I've wasted years because of thoughts like this.

[basric]

.Dramatic piece of writing. Strong and vibrant. Well done.

[alephz]

Whoof.

What a gut-punch. Concise but powerful and... YEAH.

[nyxocity]

Wow, I love the language in this. It paints such a vivid picture of emotion. Extremely well done!

[vaguelyclear]

This is excellent! It's full of dark imagery and has a really great rhythm to it, both of which express the emotions within the piece well. Nicely done.