Comments | lilyinchains: LJ Idol: Week 19

lilyinchains

LJ Idol: Week 19

Mar 28, 2011 21:58

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blackpearl61205 March 29 2011, 08:00:17 UTC

that is quite possibly my favourite thing that you have written (and posted)...it reminds me of something i wrote once...just this side of sanity...not sure which side...but its definitely treading that line...now i want to find that piece i wrote that this reminds me of...and maybe write more similar things...your brain is a truly amazing place ^_^

lilyinchains April 3 2011, 01:59:56 UTC

thank you so much, if you find the piece you wrote, I wanna see!!!

blackpearl61205 April 3 2011, 04:38:27 UTC

i did find it and i reposted it here http://blackpearl61205.livejournal.com/281829.html

^_^

shadowwolf13 March 29 2011, 17:17:28 UTC

Reading this is like sinking into lush velvet.

lilyinchains April 3 2011, 02:00:23 UTC

Oooooo, that's a great, great comment. ;)

basric March 29 2011, 22:17:53 UTC

Wow ans wow. Excellent writing. Well done.

lilyinchains April 3 2011, 02:00:47 UTC

Thanks ans thanks. :)

myrna_bird March 30 2011, 01:25:06 UTC

Gorgeous... Gorgeous!

lilyinchains April 3 2011, 02:01:05 UTC

Thank you. :)

joeymichaels April 1 2011, 01:07:10 UTC

I really like the use of the color refrains in this piece - they're both effective at communicating the character's perception of things, but also interesting little titles for the different sections. Nice touch!

lilyinchains April 3 2011, 02:01:46 UTC

Thank you. i hadn't thought of them as titles for the sections, but I can see that now, kind of cool that way, lol!