Week 18: Idol Inspiration

[lilycobalt]

If the stars and the planets tell the truth, then I am a fire person. Bring me into the light of the sun to awaken my passions. Watch me thrive in the crowd, feeding upon their energy to make the fire burn stronger. Put me in water to quench the flames of my passions and anxieties when they threaten to consume me

Comments

Concrit

[lilycobalt]

Concrit is welcome!

[similiesslip]

This is so lovely. I like how introspective it is. Nature does give us strength.

My favorite line was this:
"I yearn for the gentle moon, the dreaminess of the air, the imagination of water.." You really have a way with words!

[lilycobalt]

Thanks a lot! Nature is a huge inspiration to me. :)

[alien_infinity]

You are more capable than you think you are.

I liked this line. :)

[lilycobalt]

Thank you! :)

[whipchick]

The ending is great - nice transition from esoteric/philosophical to reality and purpose. And the concept of questioning one's "assigned" qualities is neat!

[lilycobalt]

Thanks a lot! I think I put more time into questioning my "assigned" qualities than many, though until writing this, I wasn't able to put my finger on exactly why I cared so much.

[basric]

A wonderful entry.

[lilycobalt]

Thank you!