to the end question--a forever dream? where a dream is no longer a dream because it is the only true place one resides. so much so that once placed within it another dream sprouts and stands in the distance beckoning, an expecatation of something even better. so you can hold your dream treasures--made real--but the real things from your (real) reality cannot be held? i know it's not proper to run sticky fingers all over a poem, trying to " force a confession out of it" yet i hope you forgive it seeing as i'm basically speaking aloud attempting to enlighten myself. it's very good, and as i read and re-read it with some nature/ soothing (while still edgy) music it really popped out and came alive.
i'm not sure why i found it so hard at first, its profound but your voice of statement is simple within it--so much in the dream, it's too hard to remember it all and what you see before you slip into it is not the best prod to lure you [back] into awakement. i'm ridiculous~~but i really dig it yah!
this is my maine. sometimes the easiest way to explain it is through poetry. the memories are dreams, something that i love and hate at the same time. when i sleep and remember then, i wake with salt stains on my cheeks.
i can't remember the good when i'm conscious, only the pain of leaving it. so, the question is more along the lines of how do i get past my issues to a better, more easy way, when the only thing i feel is pain (a recoil).
but thank you. i'm homesick, and this is the place that would give me equilibrium.
hello. i just started a community for pictures of shapes in the clouds. i did a search for "looking at clouds," and your journal popped up. i was wondering if you'd like to join? membership is open to everyone :-)
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so you can hold your dream treasures--made real--but the real things from your (real) reality cannot be held?
i know it's not proper to run sticky fingers all over a poem, trying to " force a confession out of it" yet i hope you forgive it seeing as i'm basically speaking aloud attempting to enlighten myself. it's very good, and as i read and re-read it with some nature/ soothing (while still edgy) music it really popped out and came alive.
i'm not sure why i found it so hard at first, its profound but your voice of statement is simple within it--so much in the dream, it's too hard to remember it all and what you see before you slip into it is not the best prod to lure you [back] into awakement.
i'm ridiculous~~but i really dig it yah!
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i can't remember the good when i'm conscious, only the pain of leaving it. so, the question is more along the lines of how do i get past my issues to a better, more easy way, when the only thing i feel is pain (a recoil).
but thank you. i'm homesick, and this is the place that would give me equilibrium.
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