The Naming of Remus Lupin

[lily_tarn]

Title: The Naming of Remus Lupin
Word Count: 955
Rathing: G
Summary: The night that 'Moony' came about.
Author's Notes: This was going to be the story of a Marauder adventure, but the boys were being lazy and couldn't be bothered to leave their dormitories. I might go through a naming of each, told from each boy's point of view. For bringandfly

Comments

[tante_in_hp]

Fabulous, Monty!

It's quite up to your usual standard of amazingness. I love the Marauders.

*bounces* *squee*

[bringandfly]

Heheh, LOL!

Oh you know how to tickle the funny bone and twist the gut at the same time, Aitch! I love the start --all that sighing. The to-and-from banter between James and Sirius was so funny and spot on that I could see and hear them!

“Doe-eyes!” said Sirius.

“I like that last one,” Remus said. “That’s James whenever he sees Lily.” LOLOL. Oh hell yeah!

Such vivid images, as always in your writing and I could go on and on about this scene but I'd end up quoting nearly every other line so I'll say Thank You Very Much and save it to my special folder marked 'Flist fics for my 45th birthday' so I can savour it again and again!

*hugs* and *smooches*

Re: *bounces* *squee*

[antonia_east]

*Grins*

I'm glad you liked it, honey. I didn't really know where it was going - and then the last line came up and I thought 'oh!' and stopped typing and thought the end would go best there. That's when I got the idea to do one for each of them. I still might - under 1000 words seems a rather paltry present!

Still, I so glad you enjoyed. *Smooches*

[jennifergale]

when Sirius sat up and sighed as well.

James glowered. “Not you too, Sirius.”

Sirius made a face. “I’m bored,” he said, and flopped down onto the floor again.

!!!!! That had me howling with laughter. Squee!

Excellent as usual, Antonia. :)

[wildmagelet]

Love it. You captured the feeling of friendship perfectly. And the last line was perfect. I definitely agree that you should continue.

[super_pan]

Yeah! Continue!