Vain

[lily_tarn]

Author: antonia_east
Word Count: 1011
Challenge: Vain
Summary: Ginny wasn’t going to be a little girl any more, though. She was going to be a woman. And tonight, she thought defiantly, she was going to be vain.

Comments

[magnolia_mama]

I like this! I like tomboy!Ginny in fanon but it sometimes gets taken too far -- you've done an excellent job reining that in to show how and why she'd want to be girlie just this one night. Neville is delightful as always, as is Hermione, but I really wnat to thank you for the way you made Michael the knight-in-shining-armor in just those few lines at the end. He gets abused so horribly in fanfic at times, so it was nice to see him in such a sympathetic light. Good work. :-)

[lissa_maylee]

Ooh, very nice. It seems to mesh perfectly with canon to me.

[nellie_darlin]

Good 'un. I'd give a longer, more coherent review but I haven't been to bed yet... But I liked it.

[flyingcarpet]

Oooh, I like this. It fits perfectly within canon. I like Ginny's grimacing during the make-up process, and the detail of the corsage is just wonderful. :)

[twirls]

Sweet and not unrealistic. Easy to relate to, and a pleasure to read. Thank you.