Comments | lily100: More

evelynlela in lily100

Aug 28, 2006 10:28

Title: More

Written For: lily100
Words: 100
Challenge: Envy

Lily brought James home one summer, when she was sixteen.
Petunia was reading in the living room when they arrived; somehow without scattering ash across the place and looking immaculate to boot.

“Good afternoon, don’t suppose you’d care for a spot of tea?” Because she really needed a cup ( Read more... )

Comments 5

coming_clean001 August 29 2006, 10:51:59 UTC

Awwwwwwwwww, that's really sweet. And sad. I like seeing a different side to Petunia. Nice work.

evelynlela August 30 2006, 04:02:48 UTC

Thanks, although it's not really different, I think she did envy her sister

merihn September 15 2006, 07:02:38 UTC

That was good... shows the cliquiness of school friends.
Its hard to write in only a hundred words.. very hard and you did a good job.
♥ Alex

evelynlela September 15 2006, 08:00:22 UTC

Thanks!
Oh it took me ages to work out how... ages in which I was terribly jealous of all who could.

merihn September 15 2006, 08:39:33 UTC

Yeah, I bet it did... I wrote a really short fic... in a fit of angst and it was actually pretty good... to restrain myself to a really small amount of words and see what I could do with it.
It was good. You worked it out well.