05 > Gallery of Femininity: Locked in Stasis

[lillysdoll]

Maxine Lowe was the kind of woman that had far too much time and money to herself. Well, arguably. She was dying. Old age, they said. She never talked much to anyone anymore. She had rented a suite at the ritz-carlton a few years back and hadn't left since. Gave the staff a ridiculous amount of money just to let her renovate the place to her liking

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[lillysdoll]

hmmn. perhaps. I was trying to spell it out for those who don't realize that this one is a direct continuation of "The Road to Metamorphosis" through mentioning Shale, the protagonist of said tale. (mostly because I felt it was too sublte otherwise)

And you should know by now that I'm all about sentance fragments. *laughs*

danke for criticsm. tis a large part of the reason they're posted here.

[lillysdoll]

truth be told, I had debated actually linking them together since I began. I had never been able to come to a decision until, after writing "road to metamorphosis," someone said they wanted more.

so here it is.

and you know me, and my preference for all my strings to eventually be tied together in a horribly misshapen bow, designed to display all the grotesqueries of humanity to whomever should see it.

:)

[moongate]

Damn you both!
I was already hoping that the story would go on....now that I know that some of them are interconnected (I mean aside from the Shale comment)...Now that I have it confirmed for me.....
It spoils it a bit. :(