The Hooker

[lillyg]

Title: "The Hooker"
Characters: Charlie/Colby, Don, Edgerton, Liz, David, Nikki
Word count: 1,369.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: The Janus List (Season 3), Trust Metric (season 4), Blowback (season 5)
Warnings: None (Do I really need to precise that a Charlie/Colby story is a slash?). Repost from ff.net
Summary: A fight happened when Charlie discovers

Comments

[mia_dcwut_09]

Like I said
before Love it loved the new adds to the fic
Thanks Colombo! You really should apply for the F.B.I.!”
rofl go charlie
i do indeed hope there's more to come from you

[lillyg]

Ah! Thanks for the comment, I was sure you would like the new lines! I have few ideas for new fics (numb3rs and CSI) I will try but I'm a little busy I have to find a training course and stuffs like that (that's boring to death!!!)

[mia_dcwut_09]

dont worry
I know what you're going through

[paranoid_woman]

Ah, I love this fic. The more I read it, the more I enjoy it, and the more I don't like that hooker.

Really, that episode was so OOC, I can't believe Colby went to bed with her. I mean, I'm grateful for the sexy body of his we could see, but it still bothers me that writers didn't handle the sex in a believable way.

As you can see, the hooker still makes me mad, but... I love your fic! Thank you so much for writing it for me!!! You are so sweet... *hugs you tight*

[lillyg]

What? You mean that you DON'T like the hooker??? I'm shocked... I didn't notice *insert innocent looks*

I'm glad you liked it! Did you notice the differences?

it still bothers me that writers didn't handle the sex in a believable way.

You just jealous of the hooker... Admit it! :p

[paranoid_woman]

Yes, I did notice the changes! The sentences you fixed look much better and I love the little additions. *g*

I'm not really jealous, because one-night-stand with Colby, really... It's a very nice idea, but it seems a bit meaningless. I prefer to have him forever and not just for a couple of hours.

[lillyg]

Yeah I agree with that!!! Colby Forever!!!

[harknessgirl]

Yahoo!! You've wrote a numb3rs fic. I loved it. :-)
It was amazing!!
I hope you write more, it was really good.
Charlie made me laugh when he made snarky comments.
Thanks for sharing.

[lillyg]

Thanks hon! I'm glad you like it... I hope I will write soon, I have some ideas for a plot or two...
Take care