Fic: Inner Fight (2/3, Sam/Spike, Flashpoint)

[lillyg]

Title: Inner Fight (2/3)
Chapter: Propositions
Prompts: WE Streetlights, #11 Forgiveness, #2 Trust, #4 Regret, WE Scars, #13 Strength
Word Count: 6x200 words
Pairing: Sam/Spike
Rating: R
Warnings: SLASH
Spoilers: a hint of 2x07, but just a hint.
Summary: When Spike is hurt during an intervention, Someone unexpected has a reaction… well, unexpected.

Comments

[paranoid_woman]

Streetlights was... GUH.

“Guh, keep doing this and you will be totally forgiven!” Spike purred.

Hahahaha...

“Where did you learn to do that?” he asked in a haze.

Whoa, hot! *g*

Spike took a look at Sam who was in all his glory. “Humm, pretty impressive,” he said, not at ease.

*dies*

“I also want you to voice what you want, what you like, what you don’t, if you feel not at ease.”

Sam rocks here. I really love it that he wants to take care of Sam and make him feel comfortable.

“I thought I’d made it up to you three times already.”

Hehehe... you know I loved that part!

“You would do that to me? I’m wounded there, buddy.”

XD Poor Spike... not Babycakes!

The image of the two of them sleeping together was so cute and sexy! I'm very glad Spike didn't leave and Sam asked him to stay. *g*

Loved all the drabbles! Can't wait for the last part. *hugs you very tight*

[lillyg]

I'm happy you loved it hon! It was pretty hard to write cause I have never written sex scene... So nothing graphic! Anyway, in general graphic scenes kill the whole stuff... they are always the same... I prefer suggestions and humor!

'Spike took a look at Sam who was in all his glory. “Humm, pretty impressive,” he said, not at ease.'

Well, when it's your first time that you're going o take 'that' up your ass, you can be scared :p

And for Babycakes, they all love to threaten Spike with her!

And I'm glad you loved my Sam, caring for his lover...

Hugs back as tight as I can!

[eviltwin]

I saw you said you've never written a sex scene before - well you rocked this one ;) In my opinion, it's often better to be non-graphic anyway. Leaves more to the reader's imagination and that's never a bad thing.

I agree with paranoid_woman - Streetlights was very, very GUH. I love well-written kisses, I really really do. Seriously, I'd be happy reading just that! The rest of them were lovely too and hoooot hot hot! Sam sounds like he has a very talented mouth..I think he should put it to good use in the morning ;) Heee.

Thank you hon!

[eviltwin]

P.S. Not finished spider fic yet, just thought I would read this first anyway ;)

[lillyg]

cheater :p

[eviltwin]

Hey, if it makes my case look better, I'm nearly done with it. ;) And...it's a bit silly. Okay, A LOT silly. I'm having a lot of fun here, but at poor Wordy's expense. XD

[shanachie_quill]

Very nice and sweet. Guess I write straight out smut so I didn't find it all that hot...but it was sweet and nice.

I loved the threatening with Babycakes--it was mean though!

[lillyg]

Rules number 1 when you want something from Spike: threat Babycakes!

I just can't write smut, I prefer sweet and nice :p so I hope you're not disappointed about that...

[shanachie_quill]

LOL man I just couldn't do it...*considers* Yes, yes, I actually could.

I wasn't disappointed...it just wasn't hot to me. But sometimes sweet is nice too.

I have got to stop reading/answering email! I'm not gonna get anything written tonight!

[lillyg]

lol! (no need to answer that :p)