Comments | lillyg: Fic: Third Loop, part 1/3 (Charlie/Colby, PG-13, lillyg)

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Fic: Third Loop, part 1/3 (Charlie/Colby, PG-13, lillyg)

May 11, 2009 15:07

Title: Third Loop, part 1/3
Author:lillyg
Characters/Pairings: Charlie/Colby, Don, Megan, David
Word Count: 3249 words
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: language, mention of non-con (just mention), slash
Spoilers: The Janus List, Trust Metric
Summary: When it’s time to deal with the aftermath of the Chinese fiasco, it’s time for Colby to cope, and maybe to ( Read more... )

slash, fic: third loop, numb3rs, colby/charly

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lillyg May 11 2009, 14:10:00 UTC

Loved this (although not in a way that makes me creepy).

Don't worry, you're not creepy! I'm glad you loved the first chapter! I will never say 'OMG she loves it! It's creepy!' (THAT would be creepy! My Ego love to be flattered! LOL!)

Thank you! For once I wanted to see a weak Colby, and Charlie being the Knight in Shining Armor, to show that Charlie is not a coward who freak out every time something bad happen and go hide in the garage.

Next chapter will be probably tomorrow. I began posting while the fic was complete because I'm tired of seeing uncompleted fics everywhere. A lot of them haven't been finished for 2 or 3 years and it's frustrating. I can't avoid rushing the writing too with that! I have preferred taking my time to write this time. Less pressure.

lillyg May 11 2009, 14:11:55 UTC

BTW it's fun, we have both Spike icons! Yours is from Buffy and mine is from Flashpoint ;-)

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paranoid_woman May 11 2009, 17:02:52 UTC

*cries* Poor Colby. To find him like that... *sniff* People are really horrible to him!

But I'm so glad Charlie's there for him. I really love that Charlie went to save Colby and all the great things he said to him!

I hope he can make Colby come to his senses again! *hugs you tight*

lillyg May 11 2009, 17:13:37 UTC

We have talked so much about this fic that I don't know what to answer... That's terrible! LOL

I love the idea of Charlie standing up for his ideas, and for Colby!

paranoid_woman May 11 2009, 17:15:55 UTC

I love that idea, too!

And don't worry about not knowing what to say... It happens. LOL

laura_trekkie May 11 2009, 17:45:22 UTC

I'm glad you're looking at this in depth. The show settled down pretty quickly, with only David really holding onto the anger for more than an ep or two. I know it's not a character-driven show as such, so it wasn't really a surprise, but it's nice to see fanfic going where the show couldn't.

Good, too, to see Charlie being so strong and supportive. He's proving that Don wasn't the only Eppes boy to get a dose of the protective gene. Hopefully Charlie, and Alan, will be able to bolster Colby until the rest of the team get over themselves!

Laura.

lillyg May 11 2009, 17:58:20 UTC

Thanks! I was finding Colby's recovery a little too 'Alice in Wonderland'. Next chapter should come pretty soon. Everything is written and beta-ed... And I have very good reviews so I won't run and hide :p

I'm glad you liked strong!charlie, I was tired of Colby the superhero, Charlie the damsel in distress ;-) Big tough guys can have bad moments too! They can even cry!