Comments | lillyg: Fic: The Box, Flashpoint, Spike, PG

lillyg

Fic: The Box, Flashpoint, Spike, PG

Jul 11, 2009 02:40

Title: The Box
Characters: Spike
Word Count: 1x200, 1x100
Warning: Character Death
Prompt: #21 Trap
Rating: PG
Summary: What if it had ended differently?
Disclaimer: Don't own anything and blablabla...
Betas: The wonderful
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flashpoint, spike, fic: the box

Comments 8

paranoid_woman July 11 2009, 00:48:42 UTC

You posted these! You made my day.

I can't even begin to tell you how wonderful they are. Yes, they're sad but that's the point. I love the rhythm and how you expressed every idea. There's a gorgeous symmetry there.

I've already told you how much I admire people who can write poetry in English. Especially people who can do it like you. Thank you so much!

lillyg July 11 2009, 01:14:00 UTC

Awww. Thank you! *blushes*

*blushes again*

I don't know what to say after all the things you wrote.

BTW I love symmetrical stuff :p

*blushes more*

PS: I feel better now that I have written that...

eviltwin July 12 2009, 21:35:16 UTC

These are beautiful, even though the subject is so terribly sad. I like the rhythm to them, they're almost poetic. Something that the repeated lines/words help to get across. The poetry of them just makes them even more melancholic; perfect to reflect Spike's mood.

~hugs you~ Excellent writing, hon. x

lillyg July 12 2009, 21:48:19 UTC

Thanks a lot hon!

I was in a sad mood after the summary of the FP episode that was supposed to be broadcast in 2 weeks, that really inspired me (even if I don't know what will happen exactly in the episode...)

*hugs back*

marvinetta July 14 2009, 19:53:29 UTC

This is really well written, and I agree it's very poetic. I'm going to cry so hard if they kill off one of my boys next season.

lillyg July 14 2009, 22:24:57 UTC

Thank you!

Yeah me too. Since I've read that news, I can't think about anything else and it depresses me.

Not knowing is AWFUL!

mustangcandi September 28 2009, 14:53:37 UTC

UGH!

Between you and PW, I'm dying with this today. The thought that Spike knows it should have been him in there - that's what kills me. I don't even know how he's going to deal the rest of the season.

This was lovely. I loved the structure. The poignancy of the words. Well done! :)

lillyg September 28 2009, 14:59:59 UTC

Yeah, it might have been horrible for him. I don't know how they will treat that. Writers didn't really let know that they will stay longer on that. I hope they won't get over it too soon... They need to morn their loss... WE need too!

If you want something funnier, read Irrational fear http://lillyg.livejournal.com/6545.html

Eviltwin and I went crazy about a spider and there came the fic... I was laughing my head off just imagining Spike fearing that! It's a total crack but I really had fun :p
So it's waaaaaaay much lighter than The Box!

Thank you very much for the comment! Means a lot!