Speak No Evil Chapter Five

[lillyankh]

Final chapter. I hope you have all liked my story. Just so you know, the quote at the beginning is from a Claude Reins film called "The Unsuspected"

Comments

[uathann]

é___è That wasn't a happy story. XD It was well-written, couldn't look away all along. Nice job. :D

[lillyankh]

Thank you!

I never said it was a happy story XD Glad you liked it.

[usagi_no_hotaru]

Awwww, that was so saaaaaaaaaaad. T-T

It was very well-written, and I could almost feel every emotion that each character was feeling at the moment. Beautifully executed and the ending was quite befitting.

Excuse me while I go cry now.

[lillyankh]

Aww! *hugs* Hope you aren't too sad because of me.

Thanks for the comment - glad you liked it.

[theohsocurlyone]

Am an awful, terrible comment-delayer, but here I am, and I love it! I got complete chills in the climactic scene; there's something about a one-word sentence that's so stark, so chilling. It works so well.

I love it all! I love the manipulativeness (is that a word) and the back-and-forth that they both go through; and it's incredibly vivid at the end. Yikes.

Anyway, in short; win! Right, I must ring you now. Onwards!

[lillyankh]

:D I know I said it already, but thanks! Glad you liked it.