fic : Heart Shaped (4/10)

[lillibetm3]

Title : Heart Shaped (4/10)
Pairing : Nine/Rose
Genre : Romance/Smut/Humour
Rating : Adult
Word Count : 12871 (total)
Status : Complete
Summary : He lifted her arms above her head and held them there, looking down at her with eyes that raked over her body until her laughter faded, and all she could do was stare back into his face; wishing so hard that he

Comments

[jer832]

Yes, I adore the Paragraph that begins and ends with 'shit'.

The thing is, some people can write great smut, some can write great plots, or maybe great dialog or clever and interesting narration. Some can find unique ways to turn phrases. Some people were born to write Classics from the 1940s. You've done it all. ( I know you don't now, and I can't address that.)

'After two falls and a submission curiosity won'.
'Her gaze explored uncharted pathways across revealed flesh.'

I can't begin to tell you how much this story, every time I read it, makes me thrilled I found you, love what reading you does to my mind and certain of my lower bits, wish I could be as clever as you, and wonder why I ever try to write smut

[lillibetm3]

I'm so glad that you love this story. In my humble opinion it's one of my more worthy efforts. :)

As always, thank you for your kindness.