"Touch Me" (Guy/Marian one-shot) PG-13

Dec 21, 2011 22:52

SUMMARY: Masks are hard to be stripped alone.

AUTHOR: Lexie akalillianschild

RATING: PG

FANDOM: Robin Hood

PAIRING: Guy/Marian

A/N: This is another reworking of an old fic of mine while I look forward to the time when I can sit down and draft an original multi-chaptered Guy story I have in mind.

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pg-13, one-shot, guyxmarian, angst, robin hood, guy of gisborne, marian knighton

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aoxelfrieda December 22 2011, 09:43:59 UTC
That was lovely! I like your idea that Guy is able to be tough and ruthless in the daylight, but at night he gets lonely and needs more. Especially like this:

"And you touched me in silent places where words only interfere. And we touched each other in sad places where only whispering makes sense, places which held memories that had shaped us and whose resonance haunted us."

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lillianschild January 4 2012, 11:00:44 UTC
Sorry for the delay in answering to your feedback.

I truly appreciate your words. Hopefully, this won't be the last Guy fic by me.

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angeliquesance December 22 2011, 13:00:14 UTC
This is so beautiful! I'm no friend of poems, but this wants me to read more.
Please, go on this way!

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lillianschild January 4 2012, 11:01:51 UTC
I'm not overly-fond of poetry either but from time to time I stumble on some beautiful pieces which I find truly inspiring.

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maddarilke December 22 2011, 15:57:17 UTC
That is REALLY lovely. Very touching, no pun intended! xoxoxo

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lillianschild January 4 2012, 11:02:59 UTC
Pun or no pun intended, that was a lovely compliment.

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piphilosophy December 22 2011, 23:22:51 UTC
Your way with words makes Guy's emotions palpable and animated. His desperate need of Marian is laid bare and revealed so poetically, melancholically. Brilliant!

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lillianschild January 4 2012, 11:55:21 UTC
I appreciate your lovely words. Thanks for reading and taking the time for reviewing.

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purple_moon123 December 23 2011, 00:26:33 UTC
I don't know whether to love you or hate your talent because you have this freaking ability to what you write rolls of the tongue like poetry!!!! Amazing as always!!!

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lillianschild January 4 2012, 12:03:22 UTC
I'm blushing profusely here. LOL.

How about coming up with some Guy or Guy/Marian artwork in the future? +hint+

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purple_moon123 January 5 2012, 05:43:44 UTC
oh you!!! Like I need more bunnies running around in my head!!!
but now that you mention it, hmmmm

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