Comments | lillerina: FIC: Carve your name

lillerina

FIC: Carve your name

May 01, 2007 23:01

Title: Carve your name
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Pairing: Veronica/Lilly, some LoVe
Rating: NC-17 for sexual situations
Word Count: ~4000
A/N: Written for the alternative ending smutathon at vm_library. Contains femslash and a certain degree of angst. The title is from the placebo song Every you Every me. The line The world has moved on borrowed from Stephen ( Read more... )

fanfic: femslash, fanfic: veronica mars

Comments 11

worldwasasong May 1 2007, 23:03:14 UTC

Ahhhh, I love you Cayt! And you know I love this fic, :).

...Ah, I see the Buffy-song-reference now! Sweet. :hugs:

lillerina May 6 2007, 22:39:30 UTC

I love you, too! ::snuggle::

So many references in this that I'm sure I've missed at least one in the authors notes. Oh well.

starxd_sparrow May 2 2007, 05:59:00 UTC

Quite lovely, dear. Heartbreaking, a little. I really thought Veronica was going to die when Logan okayed a blood transfusion... but the happy ending was a lovely surprise. And teh smut was steamy and sweet.

One ickle detail that rang out and bothered me... and I only point it out because it came up twice. Impalas, even as far back as 1958 when they were first made, came factory standard with A/C. Whether or not it would remain functional for over fifty years is debatable, but it would have had it.

lillerina May 6 2007, 22:29:49 UTC

Thanks for pointing out the mistake - chances are it wouldn't be working, maybe. I'll make sure to check up on facts in the future!

I'm happy you got the blood transfusion thing, and that you liked the happy ending. :)

motylik May 2 2007, 12:15:39 UTC

This was great. I really enjoyed it. And the twist at the end cought me completly unawares although it should have been clear. *lol* Great fic! I really love Veronica/Lilly. *sighs*

lillerina May 6 2007, 22:30:40 UTC

And there I was worrying that the ending was going to be completely obvious and clicheed! Thanks for reading, glad you liked it.

anonymous May 2 2007, 19:02:35 UTC

I'm glad I gave this fic a chance... I usually don't read slash. This was well written and had a happy ending:).

HL

inthevast May 4 2007, 03:59:56 UTC

Ooooh that was good. I love the phone call and Veronica finding Lilly. Such beautiful details in this.

he fucked her in the reference section of the library on a Friday night when even the chess club were having Firefly marathons and Parker was waiting for him at some party

This is my happy thought. And Veronica/Lilly. :)

That's one love story RT hasn't managed to ruin, yet.

lillerina May 6 2007, 22:34:07 UTC

Writing that part saddened me, because all I could think was that yes, she has sunk that low morally, but it's LoVe so all is forgivable, right?

RT will never destroy Veronica/Lilly! (If he does, we lynch him.) I'm happy that you liked it :)

inthevast May 6 2007, 23:29:14 UTC

Especially if you hate Parker as much as I do! ;D

I will cut RT if he retcons Lilly/Veronica. Haha

lillerina May 7 2007, 08:28:40 UTC

My goodness I detest Parker. She's the only character with whom I find myself yelling at the screen.

And RT will be in huge enormous trouble if he retcons them. Particularly since it's practically canon that Lilly was a bit gay. Heh.