The Fall: Chapter 3

Oct 14, 2011 14:49


Title: The Fall
Pairings: Dean/OMC:s, Dean/Jeff, Dean/Mischa
Warnings: Underage, prostitution, gang-bang, non-con, physical abuse
Summary. Dean has been taken and everythings goes downhill from there.
Notes: This is where it gets bad. Really bad. Be warned.

Chapter three )

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anndaydream October 16 2011, 19:59:27 UTC
Poor Dean... how long will he last before Neil sells him on...

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lilja82 October 17 2011, 18:22:36 UTC
He's going to last a while longer:)

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aubergineautumn October 17 2011, 01:36:57 UTC
After a thorough examination the man told Neil that Dean wasn't teared

should be torn instead of teared

This kidnapping sounds realistic, you've done a lot of world building

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lilja82 October 17 2011, 18:21:05 UTC
Right, thanks for telling me!

Yeah the story is crazy long, but there's going to be quite a few surprises down the road...

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whithertits December 15 2011, 14:30:31 UTC
Oh my, this was an unexpected little find. :) I enjoyed this, hope you update!

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lilja82 December 30 2011, 14:14:15 UTC
Thank you:) I will update, chapter four is kind of killing me though...I think I have to shorten the chapters so that they don't feel so overwhelming..

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melitta4ever December 28 2011, 23:22:55 UTC
I hope you will update soon. The masochist in me dying to read more of heartbreaking fic.

And the 'happy birthday" just stabbed me in three heart.

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