God you're end of the world sounds terrifying! And the worse thing is, I can actually imagine it happening like that... *shudders.*
Yeah, Jared you feel hollow 'cause you just raped a kid! And the 'I don't wanna force you' line doesn't really work when you tell the kid, he either does it or he dies!
Don't get me wrong, I actually feel really sorry for Jared in this, I can't imagine being all alone for such a long time, not knowing whether you're just going to die or your sleep or get murdered. He's broken, I get it. But I really like how he knows it's wrong but won't acknowledge it and keeps channeling it in other ways like getting angry...etc. Really clever. That's how I interpreted it anyway! :-)
Aww, poor Jensen, what a sweetie, I just want to bundle him up and give him a hug.
This is really great, I'm off to read the next chapter now!
So glad you liked it! And you interpreted it so well:) Jared is really damaged and flawed, but he's not pure evil either and that's what I wanted to come across..:)
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Yeah, Jared you feel hollow 'cause you just raped a kid! And the 'I don't wanna force you' line doesn't really work when you tell the kid, he either does it or he dies!
Don't get me wrong, I actually feel really sorry for Jared in this, I can't imagine being all alone for such a long time, not knowing whether you're just going to die or your sleep or get murdered. He's broken, I get it. But I really like how he knows it's wrong but won't acknowledge it and keeps channeling it in other ways like getting angry...etc. Really clever. That's how I interpreted it anyway! :-)
Aww, poor Jensen, what a sweetie, I just want to bundle him up and give him a hug.
This is really great, I'm off to read the next chapter now!
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