17. Fanfiction: Trees of Mourning

[liliths_requiem]

Title: Trees of Mourning
Author: Liliths_Requiem
Rating: PG-13 for character death
Characters:Marlene McKinnon, Arabella Figg, Minerva McGonagall, Fabian Prewett, Gideon Prewett, Molly Weasley, Caradoc Dearborn, Amelia Bones, Bellatrix Black, Andromeda Black, Narcissa Black, Regulus Black, Sirius Black, Emmeline Vance, Lily Evans, Severus Snape,

Comments

[mindabbles]

Wow, what an interesting concept. The use of the subtitles worked very well. These were each such interesting characters studies on their own and I really enjoyed how they were also linked. Very nice!

[liliths_requiem]

You can't comprehend how happy I am that you read that.
I loved the idea, but the quality of writing kept getting worse and worse, and even though I tried to fix it, it wouldn't quite cooperate.
I'm happier about the idea than the finished project, so I'm glad you like that.
Thank you for reading!

[elizassecret]

Wow, these are so intense. I especially love Alice's vignette. These lines:

When she hears the door open upstairs, hears the angry shouts of Death Eaters and Moody’s unmistakable growl, she allows the darkness and the pain to overpower her. Neville’s safe now, they’re all safe now, and everything will be just fine.

are just so poignant and painful. Nice job.

[liliths_requiem]

Thanks so much for reading this entire mess.
Alice's was definately one of my favorites to write.
Poignant and painful. Those are pretty high compliments.
You just made a very shitty night a little better.
Thank you.

[ceria_taliesin]

This is gorgeous, I love how you tied it all together. Molly's is my favorite, but I've always been a Prewett fan. Nice job.

[liliths_requiem]

I'm glad you liked it. I love Molly's piece, and the Prewett twins are a favorite of mine as well.
Thank you.