44. Franfiction: Breaking Point

[liliths_requiem]

Title: Breaking Point
Author: Liliths_Requiem
Rating: R for violence, blood lust, and language
Characters: Bellatrix Black, Alice Longbottom, Molly Weasley, Frank Longbottom, assorted Death Eaters
Pairings: Molly Weasley/Bellatrix Black, allusion to Alice Prewett/Frank Longbottom, momentary Bellatrix Black/Alice Prewett
Era: November 1981
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Comments

[zofbadfaith]

Damn. ... I'm a bit speechless, this was, like, awesome. (And yours is the only Molly/Bella I read, so... guh?)

[liliths_requiem]

Again, if you can find another Bella/Molly fic, read it and then send it to me. I'd love to get another's take on this pairing.

I'm really glad you liked it. I'm a bit proud of this one really. Thanks for the kind words.

[traces_of_being]

Wow! I don't log on for a few days, and when I do there are three brilliant new fics from you! I feel like christmas has come early and I'm the spoilt little girl, so thanks!! I'm too lazy to comment on each one individually, so instead I shall summarise my thoughts on each here, if that's okay?

Autumn Sunshine(Kittyhawk fluff):
This was really touching, and absolutely beautiful. I got an incredibly warm and tingly all over after reading it. *squee* I really love kittyhawk, and yours was lovely :D <3's

[liliths_requiem]

I'm glad you like the first one, it was meant to be sugary sweet so I'm glad it came off like that.

I'm quite proud of the other two, and I love Druella to death now so she'll probably be in future fics. Your kind words about Breaking Point make me blush, and I'm really glad the sexual undertones are noticed and appreciated. I was terrified about writing this but I knew it had to be addressed. Thank you for telling me I pulled it off, I really hope I did.

[kiskafalair]

Oh my god! You did the Longbottom scenario!

You got it up so quickly! And you did it, once again, perfectly. I could never dream to write something so amazing. Your Bella has once again ripped out my heart.

I can't even begin to explain how much I adored you comparing Alice to Molly. And mixing that in with how you described the beginning where Bella was longing for Molly and just thinking about only her made it seem as if she was torturing Molly instead of Alice at times. Bella was slipping and the torture of Alice completely pushed her over the edge. It was beautiful. <3333

*All giddy now* That was an amazing thing to wake up to. The best Bella torturing Alice fic I've ever read.

[liliths_requiem]

Yeah, I wrote it that night because I couldn't get it out of my head. I was really nervous about posting it because I was afraid Bella would come out all wrong. I'm not used to psycho-thriller pieces, so I was afraid I didn't quite capture the descent into insanity. I'm glad you liked Bella.

People often ignore that the Wizarding world is very intertwined, and I think Molly and Alice would've been very close. In a way, Bella was trying to rid Molly from her heart through Alice, I really hope that was conveyed in this piece.

Your kind words made me smile. Thank you.

[kiskafalair]

I'm currently writing the molly/Bella fic you promted me and I pictured them as cousins as well - I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought of that.

In a way, Bella was trying to rid Molly from her heart through Alice, I really hope that was conveyed in this piece.

You conveyed it really well. I could have never been able to write something like that.