Comments | liliths_requiem: 37. Fanfiction: Remus Lupin Knows All, Part One: Regretted Nostalgia

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37. Fanfiction: Remus Lupin Knows All, Part One: Regretted Nostalgia

Oct 05, 2008 21:52

Title: Remus Lupin Knows All, Part One: Regretted Nostalgia
Author: Liliths_Requiem
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Remus Lupin, Molly Prewett, Bellatrix Black
Pairings: Bellatrix Black/Molly Prewett
Era: First War
Word Count: 1213
Prompt: 100quills: 33. Transparency

( It’s okay to admit you’re still in love with her. )

molly weasley/bellatrix black, remus lupin knows all, remus lupin, bellatrix black, molly weasley

Comments 16

thedivinemiss_k October 6 2008, 03:18:16 UTC

i think i love you a little bit.

liliths_requiem October 6 2008, 10:28:31 UTC

Awww thanks hon. I'm glad you liked it.

la_dissonance October 6 2008, 05:50:25 UTC

Loved it! Shall there be more??

liliths_requiem October 6 2008, 10:28:07 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. There shall be more, he has a habit of knowing too much.

slytherinswench October 6 2008, 15:57:05 UTC

Le SIGH. This was great. Greedy creature that I am, I would love to see more of this. This is a fantastic one-shot, of course. I love your characterization, the balance of Molly's inner turmoil juxtaposed with the outer. It had a sense of realism, with Billy crying, the slight nod to Remus' condition with the superfast healing without dragging it all out and losing focus on the story you were telling. It was great!

liliths_requiem October 6 2008, 20:07:00 UTC

There will be more, so I'm glad you're looking forward to it. I'm kinda amazed at how deep you looked, so thank you for picking up the subtleties. You've made my day ((and I was having a really bad day))

slytherinswench October 8 2008, 13:40:31 UTC

There's more? *rubs hands together maniacally* I can't wait! On a more somber note, sorry you were having a bad day, dollface! Glad I could help.

I love subtlety. I think it's largely overlooked as one of our most powerful tools as writers. Even by me. I mean, my fics? When they hurt, they come up and kick you in the kneecap and you can almost imagine the "now what, bitch?" My cuts are direct, but the ones that last, the ones that stay with you longer are the ones where it's like sandpaper rubbing over the same spot again and again. I admire that.

Wait, I think I'm fangirling you. :) Anyway, hope things have perked up and I can't wait to read more!

kiskafalair October 6 2008, 20:45:51 UTC

Oh my god, you've done it yet again! I don't know how you keep coming up with these spectacular ideas, but you've definately made me into a Molly/Bella fan. I adore the conversation she had with Remus and how you made it perfectly believable. It goes way in depth with the characters and I can tell you put a lot of thoughts and musings into this before you wrote it down. Molly's pain is completely heart-felt and every reason for her feeling that way is explained perfectly.

You must keep writing. My heart like, leaped with glee when I saw you posted something else on the hpgirlslash community.

liliths_requiem October 6 2008, 21:19:36 UTC

I'm really glad you like my writing this much and that you're so free with your praise. Remus is a personal favorite of mine, so I figured he had to get in there somehow. Don't worry, more are coming.

<3

traces_of_being October 7 2008, 11:09:10 UTC

I am speechless. The tears are still coursing their way down my cheeks as I type this. .:SNIFFS AUDIBLY:. I know I love you. :D This was so touching and beautiful. <3's you and Molly+Bella
I didn't think I could fall even more in love with this pairing. .:Nods at the chorus of "MORE PLEASE!!!":.

liliths_requiem October 7 2008, 20:12:17 UTC

Aw hon, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Molly/Bella is one of my favorites, so converting people to the fold is always a plus.

There will be more, so keep watching.

<3