Comments | lilith1631: When in Venice...(Chap 8)

lilith1631

When in Venice...(Chap 8)

Sep 12, 2008 16:54

Title: When in Venice... (Chapter Eight)
Rating: NC17 eventually
Disclaimer: Only the flesh wands are mine - Everything, including copyright is JKs! Lucky bwitch...
Warnings: Slightly Crack!fic, graphic scenes, angst, language, drinking habits, UST, other pairings, original character, hufflepuff bashing, AU I suppose, obsession, voyeurism, torture, ( Read more... )

when in venice

Comments 16

monster_o_love September 13 2008, 09:02:31 UTC

God, I'm dying here!!! All this rampant Harry/Draco sexual tension.. and then the very weird & jealous sexual tension between Flinchy & Draco!! And the sexual tension between Draco and his pot of delicious tea!! err... no wait a minute, not the last one. (haha!! How very clever of Harry try to demand a full & detailed description of Draco's wet naked body for err... jealous-boyfriend-syndrome's sake! Nice try anyways.) And the rising & deflating of Hermione's hair like some strange anger-induced weather balloon!!! Gahhh!!! This fic is brilliant anxiety-inducing joy! <3 More!! More!!! ... please??

lilith1631 September 14 2008, 15:29:17 UTC

*snort* Yes, very good way of describing Hermione's hair :P As for the triangulated sexual tension between Justin/Harry/Draco/(tea) is all part of my devious plan to drive you slowly insane by way of UST, lol.

I'm surprised to have gotten your review, I haven't done the linkage post to HarryDraco community yet. Glad to see that you have taken such an interest in the story, more will be coming very soon to make up for the lateness of this chapter.

Thank you for the lovely review :D

Lilith

anoena_lilium September 15 2008, 03:38:50 UTC

‘Agent Weasley’?
*giggle*

lilith1631 September 23 2008, 21:15:02 UTC

*Cough* Yes, 'Agent Weasley'. I have always been a firm believer that Hermione's love of rules is related to a fetish for authority :P

Sorry about the late reply, thank you for the review! XD

thrnbrooke September 15 2008, 08:07:23 UTC

Soooo need more! A triangle forming?

lilith1631 September 23 2008, 21:16:39 UTC

Prepare to be triangulated with this fic. I mean, seriously, it's been obvious from the beginning that Justin does not like Draco, and now we all know why! :P

Thanks for the comment, sorry about the late reply x

fauxpersonae007 September 15 2008, 17:29:49 UTC

Please tell me JUSTIN wasn't the agent Draco was caught with. That would kill my soul. Or make for some even better jealously drama. I loved this one, and this line killed me:

Harry gasped like they did in theatre. “No! ‘Course not! I hate my body. Honest.”

Sure Harry, sure. And this bit made me smile at the very dirty visual:

"Any moisture that Draco didn’t consume through his mouth, he would surely acquire through his vanilla and mango body butter. Applied twice daily."

Love this fic!

cupricanka September 16 2008, 22:09:21 UTC

Wait, what? Draco was caught as a spy because of what?

You know, the plot, interaction and all those others stuff are very good, too. But I love your writing the most for things like:

"...two men having coded fitting conversations."

and

"...but this was like throwing a confused cow into the storm."

I simply adore your sense of humour. It's so simple, but it's working. Lately, when I only hear 'Lilith' or 'Venice' I see in my head tea-channel and smile.