Comments | lilies_pad: fic: negotiating the path (prince of persia, tamina/dastan, rating:r)

noblealice in lilies_pad

fic: negotiating the path (prince of persia, tamina/dastan, rating:r)

Jun 09, 2010 17:36

Title: Negotiating the Path
Rating: R
Character(s): Tamina/Dastan, Prince of Persia (2010)
Spoilers: set post-movie
Summary: She should not have been surprised that he was startlingly good at overturning many preconceived notions with a single act.
Word Count: 6,000+

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mov:prince of persia, fic, rating:r

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noblealice June 10 2010, 04:19:51 UTC

Thanks, I'm so glad that their banter rang true as it's probably one of my weakest areas of writing.

Ha ha, don't think of it as Disney with an R rating, think of it as Jake Gyllenhaal and Gemma Arterton with an R rating! Their combined hotness deserved smut.

anonymous June 10 2010, 03:22:40 UTC

I really really liked this! I think you did an amazing job at keeping their relationship teasing, and Tamina as feisty as we saw in the movie. Wonderful!

noblealice June 10 2010, 04:17:50 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad you think I kept faithful to Tamina's feisty voice.

mellimon June 10 2010, 04:09:40 UTC

LOVELY! Truly.

And not to sound smutty, but will they have ahem-anger-sex?
lolz

noblealice June 10 2010, 04:18:08 UTC

Haha, I don't know why I never even thought of that when anger!sex so clearly fits the two of them with their constant teasing and bickering. I bet they get really competitive as well, lol.

Thanks!

mellimon June 11 2010, 05:43:06 UTC

So does this mean they'll be more?

Possibly with anger!sex?

... ;]

pre-reading squee fidesangelus June 10 2010, 04:30:00 UTC

You wrote fic for them!!! :DDDD I feel so much better about spamming tumblr with them because I know I've got someone else who enjoys them. That's the excuse I tell myself anyway.

*goes to read*

Re: pre-reading squee noblealice June 10 2010, 04:36:22 UTC

OH GOOD, because I have the babyfic idea still to write and then someone just asked about angry!sex and AUGH why aren't more people talking about their pretty faces and how much we want them to smush those faces together?

Feel free to always spam pictures of pretty people on tumblr!

reading interruptus fidesangelus June 10 2010, 04:44:32 UTC

BABYFIC?!

Don't taunt me. You've said it twice now and I'm going to have to insist you deliver on this idea. And because it's Dastan/Tamina can we please have it be happy!babyfic?

Anyone who doesn't want these two beautiful people smushed together is unhinged.

*goes back to reading*

Re: reading interruptus noblealice June 10 2010, 04:58:31 UTC

No worries, I'm not a fic!tease. I'm 700 words in and so far it's so sweet I might get a tooth-ache.

Question: is it too cheesy/cliche to have future-father!Dastan freak out when his pre-teen daughter has the equivalent of her first date? (I dunno, first marriage proposal from a neighbouring city, I guess?) I imagine him threatening the boy with throwing knives, telling him that he's been trained by the Ngbaka, so this boy better watch his hands with his little girl and then Tamina sweeps in to try to sooth the situation over like the diplomat she is.

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berry_hearts June 10 2010, 05:07:08 UTC

LOVED THIS.

I wasn't really a fan of the movie, but this was perfect Lils! :D

noblealice June 10 2010, 05:16:46 UTC

Yay, glad you liked it!

The movie could be silly at times, but my girlcrush on Gemma was too strong to be denied.