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lilian413

Untitled Smutty Ficlet 2

Mar 07, 2010 17:05

Untitled Smutty Ficlet 2
Sailor Moon
A/Z

To elianthos, who originally inspired the idea. And to VO1, who said 'moar?' after the last one, and my muse obeyed :)

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verisimilitude9 March 8 2010, 00:15:15 UTC

Holy hell woman. You disappear for ages and then you come in swinging, don't you???

WHERE HAZ YOU BEEN, BY THE WAY?!

Talk later. Cold shower now.

lilian413 March 8 2010, 03:49:41 UTC

LOL

I figured I'd jump in the deep end of the pool, you know? :D So glad you liked!

I've been away from fandom since, gods, forever. Life, you know? It's been pretty interesting lately, and that tends to take away from my internet time :) I'll try and be around more, I swear!! I miss you, my co-empress of evil!!

elianthos March 8 2010, 01:36:04 UTC

Lol, the ode to Pantene hair fetish, check!
Oh my *__* you're on a roll (and... *gasps* do I spot a f* word here? :D. Let's high-five our ovaries (owww?), oh smut comrade XDD ( ... )

lilian413 March 8 2010, 03:53:19 UTC

The Pantene thing was all for you, BTW :D

The f word totally snuck up on me, I was writing and suddenly Zoi was all like 'screw this, poetry sucks. Me, her, sex, hell yeah!!!' LOL

Well, of course Ami has extensively studied all the nuances of sex! She's nothing if not a little over-achiever, right? Plus, they got their 'nersluts' nickname for a reason, I tell you! Zoi is an absolutely willing participant in these sessions, the fiend.

And oh yeah, this is a prequel of sorts to your pic. Like 'for visual aid, look at elianthos GUH! pic' *g*

elianthos March 8 2010, 01:53:13 UTC

P.S.: she's toweling his hair. GUH *_____* and aww. Also, hooray for super-heroes's stamina :D then they go smutting on the bed as they do in my pic, don't they >3

0_0 venusorbit1 March 8 2010, 05:26:33 UTC

I'd give you a comment but I can't find my eyeballs. Or my brain. Where did I put them?

Oh wait here it is:

HOLY FUCKING HELL MOTHERFUCKER AAAAAARGH.

He was going to cum. Right now. Right the fuck now.

OMG I don't know why, but that part was the fucking hottest thing I've ever read. And then the part when he blows it all over her.. And you...you should give smut-writing clinics or something. MEIN GOTT.

I seriously feel like I should be lighting up a cigarette right now. AYYYYA. Ho shit. Lilian, you just...fucking hell. V is broken. I ...you....this was just FUCKING PERFECT.

Re: 0_0 lilian413 March 10 2010, 03:07:10 UTC

*G* AWESOME!!! Now THAT was the response I was going for :DDDD

Writing smut is a bit new for me, so I'm glad people are liking it! And well, they do say that practice makes perfect, right? That means I'll just have to keep writing it, I guess?

ellorgast March 8 2010, 19:54:07 UTC

WHOA. I love how this begins with youma gunk, and oh how well you describe it. The jab at hair in the battlefield is AWESOME, especially since it's coming from Zoisite.

And then it's showersmut with choker and tiara on! HOT!

Your descriptions are so vivid but natural, and you make smut seem like the perfectly real human experience that it is instead of porn. And yet there is Ami with cum all over her face, and WOW. She's definitely been studying up.

lilian413 March 10 2010, 03:06:04 UTC

LOL Yay, people like it! :) I was a little unsure about posting it, but figured what the heck, I wasn't gonna let it sit on my hard drive, right?

I swear, I didn't set up for the whole facial thing, AMi jsut went with it, the clever little minx. Not that ZOi's complaining one bit, obviously!!! :D