Pretty When You Cry - Chapter 5

Jun 05, 2008 12:24

TITLE: Pretty When You Cry ( Read more... )

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charming_syrai June 6 2008, 17:43:21 UTC
“Monday,” he said, as if he’d anticipated her question. He lifted his cup on her side of the table soon after. There was still some coffee in it too. How generous
*curses* man, sweet.

“Since we’re together, like you wanted, we should learn to share things.” Now her reasoning made sense, he was just sure she didn’t mean any of it.
She cracks me up.

“Does this feel like a date to you? I mean… a diner, you, me… you eating food that I paid?"
Holy fucking hell, I love this guy. I did not see THAT remark coming (which is why I love this fic, I suppose, because it's no way near predictable).

“See,” he said. “You didn’t wanna hear.”
*LAUGHS*

“Let me tell you something, you little prick,” she hissed harshly at him. “Werewolves don’t date. We just-”

“Mate for life?” He suggested getting the little colour that was left on her face to drain away instantly. You know that feeling in the back of your throat, down in the pit of your stomach; that feeling you get when you're reading really good smut and you feel like giggling, only you can't ( ... )

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lilhobbit June 7 2008, 16:41:02 UTC
Are you saying Jason's unpredictable? Dude, you always predict this stuff? WTF?!

I've tried to make Jason into a sort of a simple guy, whereas it's Ginger who's trying to complicate every matter any way she can. I love his character totally too though it's sometimes hard to keep him close enough to his canon!self.

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charming_syrai June 7 2008, 16:46:41 UTC
EXACTLY! I think that's the reason why I love this so much because I simply cannot predict him. It's so damn refreshing, you know and every nifty remark he makes has me snickering and craving for more - so far their conversations haven't been long, which is probably totally intentional on your part and I get that. She isn't the type to chat with him about random things because he wouldn't understand her the way B would anyways.

I think no matter where you go with his character, it could still be desrcribed as canon!jason somehow 'cause, dude, he went through some changes and so everything you choose to write is justified, if you know what I mean... so don't worry about that. You're doing (truly) great job :)

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