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Fic: bright like yellow, taste like apples

Nov 11, 2010 15:36

Title: bright like yellow, taste like apples
Author: lilchibibunny
Rating: PG-13? (IDK SEE THE WARNINGS.)
Word Count: 4,600.
Characters/Pairing: Dean/Castiel, Sam is in there too!
Disclaimer: Characters to Kripke and the CW.
Spoilers: This fic is placed firmly in S5, so there shouldn't be any spoilers.
Warnings: Cursing, mention of boners but no actual boner ( Read more... )

writing, this is a fucking weird idea, i am shit at writing, dean is a fuckhead, castiel in wonderland, fucking fanfiction!, dean has a hard-on for angels too, this is my life, should i actually tag this properly?, this happened, cas is the prettiest of them all, dean is a pretty pretty princess, idk, cas and dean eyefucking again, sam winchester you silly boy, supernatural, why am i doing this

Comments 13

miya_morana November 11 2010, 21:42:51 UTC

This is the most amazing thing ever!

lilchibibunny November 11 2010, 22:23:29 UTC

ewrklh5djalsk :DDD thank you, darling! <3 <3

zekkass November 11 2010, 22:01:54 UTC

nguh. You are very very good at getting across how vivid the imagery is, and that's so neat.

Yes. Keep bribing morganoconner, mmkay? I like it. :D

lilchibibunny November 11 2010, 22:26:15 UTC

JKHSDHAHAHAHA THIS ICON ILU <3

:D! It's hard, because my mind goes faster than I can write, so I need to slow down and just focus at one part at a time. h3rkhsal I'M GLAD TO KNOW IT'S SUCCESSFUL OH GOSH <3 <3

Haha, I will! :D Bribes will continue until NaNo gets written!

cassiopeia7 November 11 2010, 23:20:58 UTC

Holy crap, this is beautiful! And poetic. And, um HOT. zekkass has already mentioned the vivid imagery and I second that, but this fic is so much more than the sum of its parts. The only way I can put into words how this story made me feel is . . . like Alice falling down the rabbit-hole, maybe? In any case, this is quite the sensory experience you've created here. Bravo!

(ETA: I love the idea of Castiel's name tasting like caramel to Dean. Of his very presence tasting like, what? Apple pie? PIE? Castiel tastes like PIE? To Dean? Wow. Just . . . wow.)

lilchibibunny November 12 2010, 04:28:51 UTC

:DDD I like kissing; I feel like I personally never spend enough time on kisses, so it was nice to spend a little time not worrying how I was going to avoid the word 'cock'. HAHAHAHA BUT REALLY

Thank you, bb! Mm, with the characters at least, those are my personal sensory experiences with them when I write them. When I see them on the show, there's no reaction, but when I write them in fics, there's a smell or a taste and always a color. :D I'M GLAD YOU ENJOYED IT, DARLING <3

(I was thinking of apple crumble, but pie works just as well? HAHAHAHAHAHA I MEAN LOLOL I DIDN'T EVEN THINK IT COULD BE THOUGHT OF AS PIE BRB LOLING FOREVER)

oywidapoodles November 12 2010, 05:22:43 UTC

Synesthesia!fic is an awesome idea. And so well executed. Gorgeous, perfect, etc.

I'm gonna go... find an air conditioner to stand in front of.

lilchibibunny November 12 2010, 14:36:35 UTC

Thank you, bb! I think the concept may be a little difficult to understand at first, but it's really a wonderful menagerie on the senses.

qrkhkwjdlksadas oh gosh i'm really glad it wasn't confusing and came across well! LOL ILUUUU <3

belledewinter November 12 2010, 18:57:22 UTC

See, darling? It came out amazing. ♥

lilchibibunny November 13 2010, 18:55:10 UTC

It did! <3 <3 <3 <3 I am very happy that it did because I was fretting about it a lot!

ALSO ILU AND YOU ARE THE BEST EVER