Fic: Mary (G)

Jul 26, 2010 09:54

I'll go ahead and bring this one out of the dark. I've dusted it off and trimmed it a little, so it should be all right?

Title: Mary
Author: lilchibibunny
Rating: G
Word Count: 1,993
Characters/Pairing: Sam and Gabriel. (Small mention of Dean.)
Disclaimer: Characters to Kripke and the CW.
Spoilers: IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE BIBLE I MEEEEAN MAYBE A FEW SPOILERS ( Read more... )

writing, what i don't even, what the fuck is this?, nothing really, supernatural

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belledewinter July 26 2010, 14:31:57 UTC
That was wonderful, darling, I love how you got into Gabby's head. And the angel boner. Because it's true.

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lilchibibunny July 26 2010, 20:00:03 UTC
You are more wonderful and I'm glad you liked it, darling! omg you know sam has a huge boner for anything angel-related pfffffffffft <3

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sjazzmreow July 26 2010, 15:48:00 UTC
Oh I loved this, bb! That is such an interesting idea to explore, and you did it so well; the flashbacks especially read beautifully. I'm such a total sucker for the show and fandom pulling in bits of real-world mythology. :P

And I love this giving Gabe age and weight and introspection thing. You just made me want to seek out Gabe fic, which, much as I love the guy (because HELLO, TRICKSTEEER), is totally new.

Nice work, kitten, loved it! <3

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lilchibibunny July 26 2010, 20:03:04 UTC
First, OMG BB ILUUUUU AND I'VE MISSED YOU <3 <3

Second, it's a huge compliment that this little piece of whatever made you want to seek out more Gabe fic, and I promise you there are some good ones out there! I personally love digging deep underneath Gabriel to his past, and the great part is there's so much to play with because he's one of the most well-known angels. AND ALSO HELLO HE'S AWESOME

THANK YOU DARLING <3

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probing_grays July 26 2010, 18:37:03 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW <3

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lilchibibunny July 26 2010, 20:03:44 UTC
;D <3

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cantarina1 July 26 2010, 22:46:47 UTC
I like that there's this sense that yes, Gabriel now and Gabriel then are different, but that there's still something ephemeral of the Archangel in the Trickster. I can also buy and really enjoy Sam's intellectual curiosity about him and can almost see where it could have gone there, if there had been more time on the show. (Because there really needed to be more time for Sam to hash out his justified anger with Gabriel.)

Nice compare-and-contrast of the brothers Winchester in general :)

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lilchibibunny July 26 2010, 23:54:24 UTC
I don't know; I usually tend to write a more serious side to Gabriel, so I have that slight disconnect between his past in Heaven and then how he is now always present somewhere in the story? Oh Sam, I bet he would be all over that stuff about the bible and trying to figure out, "omg did that really happen?" (You're right; I would really like to see a fic that dealt with Sam's anger with Gabriel about 'Mystery Spot'.)

:D THANK YOU LOVE <3 I love the contrast between the two brothers. I ALSO LOVE YOU LOTS

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cantarina1 July 27 2010, 03:12:05 UTC
I don't understand what we're discussing about Gabriel's characterization?

(The story must be out there. Quickly, to spnstoryfinder!)

I WOULD RECIPROCATE YOUR AFFECTIONS, BUT I'M PITCHING A FIT IN ANOTHER THREAD AND YOU KNOW, SOLIDARITY.

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cristiline July 27 2010, 16:47:52 UTC
That was beautiful! I love that with shows like this, we can take things that aren't mentioned directly in the show and use them to flesh out the characters. And your writing, of course, was absolutely wonderful. ♥

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