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More Than Words

Dec 11, 2009 01:11

Title: More Than Words
Author: Lilbatfacedgirl
Fandom: stxi
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Sex and Cursing
Disclaimer: I don't own any of it.

Summary: James Tiberius Kirk and Leonard Horatio McCoy, MD are hot, sweaty, and trapped in a closet with Your imagination. Enjoy!

A/N: I'm blushing!

( Well, for starters, this all your fault! )

fandom: star trek xi, rating: nc-17, kirk/mccoy, fan: fanfiction

Comments 16

nice_faces December 11 2009, 07:02:09 UTC

ummm....I love this. Can I say that? Yes. I do lovvc it. How is it possible to fit that much characterization and emotion into a dialogue-fic?! You are amazing,

Also, I may or may not have commented on this before (can't remember, as I am currently innebriated), but is your lj name a reference to Paul Simon?? If so, kudos. Kudos indeed.

lilbatfacedgirl December 21 2009, 01:42:07 UTC

Thank you....and yes, Paul Simon all the way, baby.

passionate_ink December 11 2009, 07:50:14 UTC

Yeah, this fic is 'more than words' alright. I believe my exact sounds were something like: "UNF soegf nfgfb snfkjjdsfnk. Bed. NOW."

Kudos to you. Like, major kudos. I don't normally go for the dialogue-only fics. But for this one . . . Yes, I believe I can make an exception since you appear to have dumped sex, epic winnage, hottness, and a deal with devil into a blender and poured out this fic.

lilbatfacedgirl December 12 2009, 16:08:33 UTC

A deal with the devil, huh! Wow, thanks.
I've never written a fic that could threaten my salvation before. My grandmother would be mortified. Me, I'm kinda proud!

passionate_ink December 12 2009, 18:25:11 UTC

I'd be proud, too. I feellike, whatever the deal was, you (or your readers) got the getter and of the bargain. Lol.

cedarrapidsgirl December 11 2009, 13:16:38 UTC

This is too hot! And cute! And so like Jim to get them stuck in a closet..sigh.

boldlynaps December 11 2009, 15:45:02 UTC

Funny, hot, cute - three of my favorite things, especially with Jim 'n' Bones, who are two of my favorite people. Well done!

sangueuk December 11 2009, 18:40:39 UTC

I LOVE comment fic being as I'm totally sound obssessed! This was so hot, thank you!

lilbatfacedgirl December 12 2009, 16:14:40 UTC

Oh, me too! I feel like being able to talk to someone during sex demonstrates a really high, intimate comfort level that I totally see between these two. Good sound effects are one of my biggest hangups.