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[VK] Shades of Grey (26/?)

Aug 29, 2009 22:59

Title: Shades of Grey (26/?)
Rating: T
Warnings: Do not read if you don't like OCs, or follow Vampire Knight manga. Please read my previous posts regarding my OC to get the picture. And I think the story will get darker and more complicated... I've warned you...
Word Count: 3,635 words
Characters/Pairings: Zero, Misaki, OCs
Notes: Thank ( Read more... )

shades of grey, vampire knight, vk, zero, misaki

Comments 4

teruame August 30 2009, 05:05:12 UTC

;______;

Cross and Yagari are right-on! And Misaki's emotional side works so well here, as quiet and calm as it is. What's more, you got their habits down precisely as I had imagined them to be!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...;_; Nightmares, eh? Very not ideal DDD: Especially for Zero.

Keep it up!

lilac_ayame August 30 2009, 06:52:26 UTC

Well... Cross and Yagari's portion were rather small in this part actually... so I can't say much.

I don't know, actually I imagined Yagari dark, bitter coffee person, but I cannot help but add his liking towards his habits in adding more sugar. Considering that his life revolved around hunters, I'd imagine he would need all the calories he could get, although not necessarily he likes it. And I think I saw Cross drinking tea in the manga.

Guessing Cross' habits are easier than Yagari. I'm basing Yagari's characteristics from Zero as Cross once implied the similarity of the former master-apprentice.

I must say this is the first part with Misaki's thoughts were rather dominant. I rather hope that you're starting to see what kind of person she actually was.

Both Zero and Misaki have their fair share of nightmares.

shapby August 30 2009, 14:21:26 UTC

aha. so it's cut :D~ nice place to cut the chappie.

well, since she's not as talkative, misaki's pretty likeable in this chapter. ha. and i like how zero plays the role of Head of Hunters. from the outside it may seems cold-hearted and all, but actually... wait, am i giving out a spoiler? oh well.

keep it up!

lilac_ayame August 30 2009, 14:41:45 UTC

Yeah, there's some limit in LJ on how many words at most can be posted. And I didn't actually make it in chapters, so yeah... Where to cut is one of the question whenever I post here.

You just don't like her whenever she's being talkative? *wonders whether Misaki's talkative in other parts*

Hahaha. Doing this make me still able to update although I'm not writing anything yet. I think that last review is a bit too early I think :p