my senior project....please read!!!!

[lil_devil39151]

as many of you know, im writing a story for children as my senior project. im gonna post it here in my journal. i would like to have you guys read it and tell me what you think. right now i need constructive criticism. each paragraph is a new page... with that said.....

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[anonymous]

LoL =D That was cute! (And hey! =P You used my name! =( Damn colds.)