Fic "The Luckiest" Sam & Dean - Gen Alternative scene of 6.22's ending/7.01's beginning.

[likiel]

Cold blue eyes.  Murderer blue eyes.  Inhuman blue eyes.

“I’m your new God…”

A soft and yet so sick voice.

“A better one…”

A deliberately smug expression, like suddenly the world’s happiness and safety is resting in his fist.

Well, well, it’s been thrown it at him and he caught it, didn’t he?

"...So you will bow down and profess your love unto me,

Comments

[borgmama1of5]

Intriguing way you structured this. Liked the differing POVs.

[likiel]

Really? Thanks. I don't know if it's intriguing... this fic was wrote when season six was ending, a while now, and it was my first fic ever, so maybe the weirdness comes from this ^^ I'm very glad you liked it though! Kiss!

[likiel]

Sweetie thank you, thank you, thank you! Just for this I'm glad I didn't delete this! your my personal inspiration with all your super comments ^^

I rewatch 6.22 today (and 3.08 cause I couldn't help it) and this is exactly what I wanted to happened. Very proud you liked it!

Merry Christmas bb, tons of love ♥♥♥

[sadritsuka12]

wow... it beinf tear to my eye poor sammy.. yay dean hug sammy,.,.

[likiel]

At least Sammy get a hug ^^
Thanks for your comment hon!

[twnchesterangel]

I loved this! It was the perfect amount of schmoop!! Not too much - just enough to keep it in character. Soooo awesome. I'm glad you decided to keep and post this. I loved the different POVs and I loved how Bobby got chills just by looking at Dean. I loved Dean's "son of a bitch. Oh he was gonna profess something, alright" That gave me chills! :D And Sam's memory was beautiful and perfectly in character. And I loved the hug. Guh. You made me melt with this fic. Beautiful. Thank you. *hugs*

[likiel]

No no no, Thanks to you!!! What a wonderful comment! I'm blushing so hard right now! (and maybe I'm gloating a little too *giggles*) You're very sweet hon, thank you for your compliment, I'm so glad you liked it! I did well by not deleted this ^^
Here a littel something for you:

big kiss and ENORMOUS hug!

[thoughtyouknewr]

Wow, this is amazing and really touching. I love how you show the things that dragged them apart as well as how close they are anyway. The song adds a really nice touch.

This honestly makes me want to go write something. Music and good videos tend to have that effect on me........

Who sings the song you include?

[likiel]

Thank you! I've made a lot of vids, (I'm a writer, a vidder and an artist) but this one is very special to me! the post of the article of "This Close" is here: http://likiel.livejournal.com/6978.html

It's a Caleb Brad Kane's song. A wonderful one for Sam and Dean ^^

[thoughtyouknewr]

awwwwwwwwwww! That was so cute and touching and just.....awwwwww

I love how Dean carried little Sam. I've always kind of had a thing for tiny Sammy and Dean liking to pick him up. You could probably guess that from reading my stories.

Love how Dean calls Sam "little brother" even though Sam is bigger than him.

Very nicely written.

[likiel]

Oh thank you sweetheart! for the record, I think "Dean'rules" is the best Tiny!Sam fic EVER WROTE!
Love <3

[thoughtyouknewr]

Now you're making me blush. Thank you. I live to please.

especially because I current have NO social life. Seriously. I'm home schooled and just moved states, so I know no one. The internet is currently my life until I can get into a sport or something.

I was a gymnast for 8 years, but I got hurt a couple years ago (dislocated ribs are a bitch, and so are concussions) and it never really healed (my ribs at least). So now I can't be a gymnast any more. (pouts)

[likiel]

I'm sorry to hear that, that's sucks! Well, at least, there a lot in this fandom to distract you from boredome right? I'm sure that with a little time, you'll find a lot to do in your new state. I liked gym when I was in highschool, but I choosed to continue to play tennis in University. I'm 22, time to always change my mind ^^