Title: Favour

[likestowrite]

Title: Favour
Author: likestowrite
Pairing:  Ianto/Jack, Tosh
Spoilers: None
Rating: U
Summary: Tosh asks Ianto for a favour, much to Jacks amusment 
Disclaimer: No copy right intended. I have no financial gain from this, it's just a bit of fun. Characters belong to R.T.D
(Word count: 716 so quite short)

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“Ianto?” Tosh said tentatively, slightly cringing,

Comments

[phantomreviewer]

I really like your writing!

:D

This made me randomly smile

:D <- (Random Smile)

[jo19844]

i liked this story alot... good concept and short and sweet :D

but... remember to capitolise. 'Jack' needs a capitol letter.

[likestowrite]

I would then i start, then think "oh sod it, people know who i mean" i really should put more effort in, but a phrase of my life

[jo19844]

you really should make an effort with it, cos it really puts a dint in tehe story for me i read and i like but then the bad capitaloisations puts me off a bit. Good puntuation and grammar is part of thr wrting experience, and en even bigger part of the reading experience.

[likestowrite]

In that case I shall ensure that it is capitalised in the future, and all the rest of it to the best of my ability, although the sub-standard education may hinder somewhat, but not for me the furrow brow. Good advice I appreciate it.

[tiggerbrasilf]

hehehehe, rent-a-Ianto! Can we borrow him too (: