Doctor Who fanfic - At last!

[likestardust]

Title:  Temptation 1/1
Author:

janey_xox
Pairing: Ten/Rose
Rating: PG
Spoiler Warnings: Spoilers for season three and two.
Summary: He needed to see her face again.
Disclaimer: Sadly, I own nothing of DW. This is just a fanfic.
Author’s Notes: Ok, this is my first attempt at angsty fanfic in over a year now, and the last fanfic attempts were awful. So...

Comments

[xbriyeon]

Ooh I like this very much.. so close, yet so far.. TT

[likestardust]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it =)

[dreamin_hope]

I could definitely see Ten doing this... especially, like your fic described, if he felt completely alone.

[likestardust]

Thanks! I felt so worried that I got it all wrong and would get bad reviews XD

[scifiangel]

Great job on this one. I feel so bad for him. He needs to find love again.

[likestardust]

Thank you, and I agree! (Preferably Rose...;))

[coming_clean001]

Yay! You finished it. =D And only 2 days later than you were aiming for! This is great. Are you happy with how it turned out

[likestardust]

Haha, thanks! I am very happy with the way it turned out *nods* And I do realise what you mean about the last line...thanks for taking the time to point it out =) And maybe someday in the future there'll be another fanfic...

[coming_clean001]

No worries at all, I like feeling like I've posted some con-crit, rather than just "ZOMGZ! I WUV THIS! RITE MORE!" <<<<< That annoys the heck out of me, but sometimes I can't think of anything else to say. *frustrated*

[likestardust]

I'm not very good with pointing out how people can improve, so I just tell them how much I enjoyed reading the fic *shrug*