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likeahurricane7

The Challenge: Chapter 4

Nov 23, 2009 21:09

Title: The Challenge

Fandom: Pirates of the Caribbean; Sparrington

Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: I have no claim on POTC or the lovely characters who populate it, even if it seems that James Norrington has, somewhat disconcertingly, made himself quite at home in my head with no apparent plans to leave. Jack Sparrow has been dropping by at random ( Read more... )

theft, brother, jack sparrow, sheet, lawrence, naked, linen, pistol, commodore, bullfighting, threats, accord, challenge, james norrington, black pearl, elizabeth, mocking, freedom, nudity, the challenge

Comments 9

smithkingsley November 24 2009, 10:47:24 UTC

AWW, that's so pretty! You really bring out the chemistry between these two. I like how you brought in the sheet again at the end. :-) Thank you for another lovely story!

likeahurricane7 November 25 2009, 02:42:02 UTC

Thank you muchly, darling; I appreciate the support.

I love that sheet.

And you're more than welcome.

porridgebird November 25 2009, 04:22:36 UTC

*wild applause*

That was just gorgeous. Wow. I really love the way you write these two out of bed, and in bed. Both of them alpha to the core, which is what makes this pairing so fascinating to me, and you don't lose that for an instant. Well done, HUZZAH! and thanks for a wonderful read!!

likeahurricane7 November 25 2009, 05:43:29 UTC

~theatrical bow~

Thank you, darling. I'm particularly fond of alpha-characters, especially the more complicated and clever ones; this pairing is thus very a intriguing one for me to explore; It's always good to hear that I'm doing a good job at the same time. You're more than welcome.

theladyhel December 6 2009, 01:01:24 UTC

This was lovely! The character interaction was brilliant and the plot was just flawless.

txorakeriak December 29 2009, 19:20:41 UTC

OMG, I so did not expect this. But, just like James, it's not as if I'm complaining. AT ALL. Holy mother of fuck, this was absolutely hot. *fans self frantically* I love how dominant they both are, and how they keep challenging each other. I also love how Jack keeps underestimating James - though I must admit I totally underestimated him too! The Navy is good for all sorts of things, isn't it? *snicker snicker* To see the look on Jack's face when James started sucking him off... XD

By the by, I don't think I've complimented you on your characterizations of Will and Elizabeth yet. It's no secret that they're my least favourite characters in PotC, but you write them really well and they're not half as annoying here as they are in the movies. ;) And I totally laughed out loud when Elizabeth slapped Jack. XD

likeahurricane7 December 29 2009, 20:24:18 UTC

Many thanks, many thanks. You are ever so good for my ego, m'dear. And I do so love catching people off-guard, as I'm sure is obvious. :D

And I concur on the "Will and Elizabeth are annoying in the movies" front, but I do try to do them some justice as I feel their characters have potential, however the movies tend to ignore that sort of potentiaI. I'm still not altogether fond of Will, but I've gained an affection for using Elizabeth as a foil, as she can be quite good at it.

txorakeriak December 29 2009, 20:45:53 UTC

their characters have potential
Very very true. Not sure if you've seen The Incredible Journey of Mary Bryant, but Will Bryant is pretty similar to Will Turner, only he's got depth and isn't annoying.

Thanks for exploring their potential here, it's very enjoyable! :D

likeahurricane7 December 29 2009, 21:03:22 UTC

Hmm. I shall have to add that to my list of films to look into. Thanks for the recommendation.

And you're more than welcome. It's been quite interesting so far.