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likeahurricane7

Friends and Enemies

Sep 19, 2009 09:24

Title: Friends and Enemies

Fandom: Pirates of the Caribbean; Sparrington

Rating: R

Disclaimer: I have no claim on POTC or the lovely characters who populate it, even if it seems that James Norrington has, somewhat disconcertingly, made himself quite at home in my head with no apparent plans to leave.

Summary: A surprisingly sincere and heartfelt ( Read more... )

turner, jack sparrow, spies, sparrington, polish, captain, will, commodore, unexpected, accord, james norrington, hawk, william, freedom, smithy, friends and enemies, tortuga, sword

Comments 12

minerva7 September 19 2009, 15:51:38 UTC

*sighs happily*
This is exactly the kind of (post-COTBP) Sparrington-happiness I've been missing (and longing for) for quite awhile: lovely setting and atmosphere as well as well-captured characters (especially Jamie). Beautifully written! :)

likeahurricane7 September 19 2009, 15:54:37 UTC

Thank you, very much, and I'm happy that I could satisfy that particular craving, as I was hoping to achieve just that.

orpsgod September 19 2009, 17:23:47 UTC

Very nicely done as always! :)

likeahurricane7 September 19 2009, 20:52:14 UTC

Thank you, m'dear.

porridgebird September 19 2009, 19:45:14 UTC

Hey I like this a lot!! I think your writing just keeps getting better, too.

I love this madly:

For a moment, he hesitated, then quietly turned the knob and opened the door.

Click! Click!

Two pistols were aimed at his head. The men holding them, freshly awoken though they were, were instantly alert.

YES!! That is perfect in so many ways ♥

Thanks for a lovely read. Write more, please!

likeahurricane7 September 19 2009, 20:55:38 UTC

Thank you, darling. I'm very flattered, and glad that I'm improving (like a real writer and everything!) as I go. I had fun with that scene, as much for the dual pistols of the paranoid paramours aimed at Will, as well as the sheer fun that is writing Amusingly-Traumatized!Will. I'm happy that you liked it as much as I did.

hips_lips_tits September 19 2009, 20:05:09 UTC

yeeeeeeeeeeeow.. hot. and amazing. lovely!

likeahurricane7 September 19 2009, 20:56:24 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

smithkingsley September 20 2009, 15:51:06 UTC

I like the idea that James might have been Will's mentor. Jack saying 'you know me too well already' is lovely! Thank you for this. I think the boys are enjoying being written by you. :-)

likeahurricane7 September 20 2009, 16:50:38 UTC

That mentorship was one of the primary plot bunnies behind this story, so I'm happy to hear that it seems to have worked out. You're welcome, and thank you very muchly; I am quite flattered.