Dragon Age 2 // Secrets, Part 1/6

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Title:  Secrets, Part 1/6
Fandom:  Dragon Age 2
Characters/Pairings:  Fenris/f!Hawke
Rating:  T
Summary:  Five times Marian should have said something more (but didn't), and one time that she did ...
Author's Notes:  DA2 has taken over my life, basically.  And surprisingly, most of all to me, is the fact that I've completely fallen head-over-heels in

Comments

(I don't have a Fenris icon, so this is the next best thing)

[selfcontained]

I have already told you, but I am commenting here too.

I APPROVE OF THIS FIC.

Especially the grabbing. :3

And I'm glad you actually FINISHED it (at least part one), so now I can stop nagging you. XD

Except to write more!!!

Re: (I don't have a Fenris icon, so this is the next best thing)

[night_is_fallen]

I APPROVE OF YOUR ICON HERE. XD

The next parts of the fic should not take me as long to write, and they are also a WHOLE LOT MORE FUN. This one was just Marian being a snarkmonster and then having a grand ol' "OHSHI" moment at the end.

Which is still fun. Just not AS fun as what's to come. XD

[rhia474]

Okay, that was utterly great. And moving. And vivid. And yay, you also have snarkmonster!Hawke like me... I think she's the best for His Broodiness. He needs the snark. Bad.
More, plz?

[night_is_fallen]

Thank you so much!!

Yes, I totally think Mr. Broodypants needs Little Miss Snark to keep him in check, lol. Otherwise he'll just get away with being a grump all the time, and we can't have that! XD

I am working on Part Two at this very moment, so more is definitely forthcoming.

[solan_t]

Well, how else do you get him to laugh? And his laugh is totally worth it.

I liked this, thank you for sharing. :D

[night_is_fallen]

Hahaha, EXACTLY. The first time she made him laugh in the game, I was like WELL THIS IS JUST EXACTLY WHAT HE NEEDS! XD

And thank you!

[night_is_fallen]

Thank you!! I'm really glad you liked it.

LOL I liked Fenris's special way of "flirting" in the game -- where you weren't quite sure if he was hitting on you or perhaps insulting you subtly -- so I tried to make that happen in this fic, and I'm glad it came through that way. :D

[severedscythe]

AHA oh god those last couple of lines just made me LAUGH. I love your hawke. <3

[night_is_fallen]

:D Thank you!! My Hawke is what I like to consider an intelligent spaz. She can take care of herself, but she's just kind of a mess in all other aspects.

[severedscythe]

They are the MOST amount of fun. My Hawke is kinda similar, only he's more along the lines of a bitch, on top of being ridiculous. <3

I love reading everyone's interpretations of their own Hawke characters. And yours is FUN.

[night_is_fallen]

Your icon is killing me! LOL

I really love snarkmonster!Hawke ... how basically, she's always cracking herself up, but everyone else is kinda like "..." LOL

I think Fenris NEEDS someone a little bit ridiculous to counterbalance all that brooding he does!

[iceprincessd]

Oh! I loved this so much! Your Hawke is sarcastic and lovely and a perfect foil for Fenris' more serious side. I'm so glad that you're writing; I've missed all of your wonderful stories. *points to icon* I'll let Basch explain how I felt after reading. :D

He laughed then, and it was loud and honestly amused, and unlike anything she’d ever heard from him -- lovely, really, a lovely sound, and it transformed his face into something else. Something real.

THIS. *happy sigh*

[night_is_fallen]

Oh, thank you!! I'm glad you like! I've got tons of these little "moments" for the two of them just bouncing around in my head ... PLOT NUGS ARE EATING MY BRAINS.

And haha, yeah, I kinda feel like any Hawke that's going to be with Fenris NEEDS to have some snark and sass to her. He NEEDS that (and also, it makes him laugh, which is win).