It almost feels irreverent to comment, but I just wanted to say your poetry leaves my heart aching. Your way with words, especially the repetitions and phrasing, really hits where it hurts. You convey so much in only a few words.
Why is it irreverent to comment? Lol. I really appreciate and enjoy reading your feedback :)
This poem was written quite some time ago, on a website where my works still are. I had a falling out with a couple of friends who own and run the site. I keep meaning to transfer all of my poetry here haha. I was looking at this site earlier, and I guess it kind of re-opened old wounds.
This is one of my own favourites too, I don't think any other poem I've written comes close to expressing what i felt when I wrote this poem. All of my poetry are sad, dramatic, emo pieces XD
I guess the reason I say that is because it is very apparent this poem came from your heart and has some history. It's a piece of yourself, and I thought it very touching.
Personally, I'd love to see more of your poetry. Please share if you like! Sad, dramatic, emo poetry is the only poetry I have ever known or written. :D
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This poem was written quite some time ago, on a website where my works still are. I had a falling out with a couple of friends who own and run the site. I keep meaning to transfer all of my poetry here haha. I was looking at this site earlier, and I guess it kind of re-opened old wounds.
This is one of my own favourites too, I don't think any other poem I've written comes close to expressing what i felt when I wrote this poem. All of my poetry are sad, dramatic, emo pieces XD
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Personally, I'd love to see more of your poetry. Please share if you like! Sad, dramatic, emo poetry is the only poetry I have ever known or written. :D
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