Comments | lightningr5: Last but not least

lightningr5

Last but not least

Feb 11, 2009 03:17

( Obituary )

Comments 9

akasha_lilian February 11 2009, 10:53:57 UTC

Hi there! Another burst of creativity, huh!? REALLY liked all of them, cause they're good. ;-)

So you were a smoker, huh? Didn't know that! ;-P (good thing you quit though!)
The fridge scene was PRICELESS, I loved it so much, kept me chortling for a minute! =D
Hope was pretty good, too, with all the things we don't know about the brother and sister, but still achieving the sense of hope at the end with beautiful images.

Now here's the thing. I've spotted some slight...mistakes? You want me to point them out to you or you'd rather I didn't? I'm not sure, cause it might seem like I'm criticising or something, which I'm not, cause I really liked all three pieces! It's just the teacher in me, you know!? ;-P

akasha_lilian February 11 2009, 14:11:55 UTC

no, they're not. they're just from me ( ... )

lightningr5 February 11 2009, 14:13:48 UTC

and why the hell do I always write anonymous? (btw, i spotted a missing "will" in the obituary but that was intended as well, of course.

lightningr5 February 11 2009, 14:14:29 UTC

anonymously -.-

balaetui April 9 2011, 02:57:50 UTC

Iâve been into blogging for quite some time and this is definitely a great post.Cheers!

lightningr5 April 10 2011, 08:48:13 UTC

Thank you for that nice comment. Sadly I'm not maintaining this blog anymore. It's a thing from my past; always treasured, but over :)

Roulette Strategies anonymous April 12 2011, 22:45:11 UTC

Ich merke gerade in diesem Moment dass ich diesen Blog wesentlich haufiger besuchen musste ;) - da komme ich wirklich auf super Einfalle

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pangaroitefy November 3 2011, 03:27:29 UTC

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