RPS FIC: On a train heading west of nowhere special [Jared/Jensen]

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Title: On a train heading west of nowhere special
Author: Selena
Pairings/Characters: Jared/Jensen
Rating: R
Word Count: 4, 081
Summary: It happened quickly, all of sudden, all at once. And yet it was always there right in the back of his mind, this half-formed feeling set on a steady slow burn to fucked-up-ville.
Disclaimer: All fiction

Comments

[memoryfloodsin]

Eeee! What a good thing to wake up to. Great fic hun.

[lightly]

*smishes*

Thanks hun!

[lazy_daze]

Hee, adorable! I love pining!Jensen, aw.

[lightly]

Thank you!

[pippilottah]

Heee, I love their banter and everything else. Awesome :D

[lightly]

Thanks baby!

[fpvs]

Ya know, somehow that image of Jared smiling... Every time throughout... It just got to me. In a GOOD way! :D

Ya know what else? You? You've got a way at describing things. An awesome way with words. And how it's all told from Jensen's point of view... And he seems dazed the whole way through :P It's awesome! *teehehe*

I spotted a typo though...
Then the humming started. Jensen was too dumfounded to recognize it at first: it started as a low, tuneless rumble in the back of Jared’s through, almost like a purr before Jared found his rhythm.
was supposed to be throat, yeah?

[lightly]

Thanks baby! You are AWESOME!

And thanks *meeps* I did totally mean throat, thank you!

[aynslee]

Aw, the boys were lovely in this!!! :D

[lightly]

Thank you!