[Fic] Lighter Shade of Blue

[light__of__day]

Title: Lighter Shade of Blue
Author: light__of__day
Rating: PG-13/R; mild suggestive tones to some sentences.
Spoilers: None; Nexus-related only.
Word Count: roughly 5800
Disclaimer: Fullmetal Alchemist (Hagane no Renkinjutsushi) is copyrighted by Hiromu Arakawa/Square Enix. This is a work of fanfiction for personal entertainment only. All song breaks are

Comments

[al_notfullmetal]

I haven't read these yet, but I've read those few and I love them and OMG I AM SO EXCITED THEY'RE DONE *readreadread*

[al_notfullmetal]

My icon says it all. ;_; I lovedy loved them all. They made me wibble and ouch and worry and want to pet Riza, and I hope she'll be okay in the future. ;__;

FANTASTICALLY DONE. ♥

[keeper_melisan]

((ooooh... nice.))

[impactbomb]

They're all good, but

Gamma #04 - Box

When the shopkeeper told her it was marked down because it was broken and no longer played a melody, Riza bought the antique music box, with the blonde female and dark-haired male china figures poised to dance on the top; later that night, she hurtled it with all her strength against the wall in the motel bathroom.

just broke me completely and utterly. That is amazing. How do you do that?

[opposingsoul]

These were damn good. "Box" was probably my favorite, just for how powerful and heartbreaky it was.

Well done!

[ceasefire]

Aaah, those were awesome. ^_^

I agree with many of the other posters here in that "Box" was the most powerful of the themes, but I also thought "Shadow" painted a very powerful picture of what Riza was going through.

^_^ Excellent job.