Where Love is Divided by Hate 1/1

[lifesscar]

Series: Act of Play
Title: Where Love is Divided by Hate
Chapter: 1/1
Word Count: 5898
Rating: R
Disclaimer: The title is being politely borrowed from 12 Stones. This is, obviously, fake and did not happen. I am merely borrowing the names and faces of real life people and none of this is meant in any way to harm their reputation. This is a

Comments

[indusnm]

I really like this fic- I went through a period in high school where life was going to hell, and well- I took control by throwing up every day. No, I wasn't anorexic, or bulemic- didn't make myself throw up and hated doing it- but I think my body was protesting everything around me and subconsciously I was like, this is the one area in my life I can control. IT helps to have a mom who had a severe eating disorder

[lifesscar]

I went through a similar period through high school as well. Though the stress made me stop eating, I can never puke unless I'm drunk -_- but yeah, the stress of homelives and school lives and the enviorment around us all effects our bodies and can make us sick in various ways. I hope your mom is okay, and I hope you're doing okay too <3 *hugs* (In a general sense it would be bulimic as they throw up while Anorexic's don't eat but there are sub classes of a blumic anorexic and an anorexic blumic. Go Psychology -_

[culturegeek76]

I practically do the happy dance when I see an update of this - and it never disappoints.
I really feel for Jen, what with the porn on the web. (Have a friend that had this happen and it's kind of terrifying, you know?)

I love that Jared is angry/worried with Jen's weight loss, but still tries to protect him from their Momma's.

115? 6'? Crap, I'm 5'3" and the last time I weighed that, I was really skinny looking. A boy that weight would be gross. Wait, I lie. I dated a hottie who was 6' and 128 and he was hot. With his clothes on. ha.

Look forward to reading what happens next soon.

[lifesscar]

Aww, yay! I cause someone to do the happy dance. Yay! That makes me happy, and it makes me happier that I have yet to disappoint. =D

Aww, I'm sorry to hear that that happened to your friend. I hope everything worked out =(

I'm glad you love that fact. I think it's still within all of us to try and keep things from parents. Just what's left over from teenage years.

To be honest, I've never been good with weight. I had had it at 125 but I dropped it down to that in the editing stages because I was like "Okay, you have skinny guys then you have skinny guys." I've found out from the comments that I shoulda left it at 125 and I woulda been perfectly fine. =X

Thank you! <333

[fpvs]

*points at what fanofsuper said* I still Ctrl++ to read your fic. Just, FYI.

Personally, I sometimes think Jensen is a tad too feminine (because you asked). But it's SO far from how badly other people sometimes write the boys, so it doesn't bother me in this fic. Infact, given his history, etc. etc, I think it fits. (though if he became less so over the future chapters, as he became more confident, I think THAT would fit, too).

As always, I loved the story.

Oh! I believe Jensen is 6'1 and Jared 6'4... So your weights are good. :) (though, if Jared were more muscular, he might weigh a little more...)

[lifesscar]

Ew, it's still small. =( I'm sorry. I'll look for one that's got bigger or text... or try to figure out how to manually make it bigger =(

Yes! An honest answer. Kara said they were feminine so I was freaking out. It's something for me to keep in mind while I'm writing, thanks =) and at least it's not as bad as some, thank goodness.

Thank goodness, I'm glad I got them right. My memory's not failing yet. =)

Thank you so much <333

[fpvs]

Well guys keep growing... Until later than females... So... I suppose technically, Jensen could feasibly be only 6 feet in your story. (Yes/No?)

Small, white font on black background... If it were a different two colours, it would be alright, but because it IS white on black, that is why I increase the font size.

[lifesscar]

I could get away with that =D yay!

I was about to say it wasn't white and black... but it is =( I thought I had changed from that since the last one was the same colors as well.

*starts looking again* I want different colors for the text. That was one of the main reasons I wanted to change it in the first place, I was bored of the text color. =(

[z3s_keep_going]

loved this ;D

[kuhekabir]

I think I missed this update...sorry :)