Darkened Hearts 3

[lifesscar]

Title: Darkened Hearts
Chapter: 3 of 4
Rating: Pg-13/R
Warnings: Child abuse
Beta: Kam Aka Lastasalways, my lovely twin who I can con into doing anything for me.
Disclaimer: None of it except the words belong to me.
Summary: John’s hands moved through Dean’s soft brown strands, moving the bangs away from the young boy’s forehead, his fingers

Comments

[cariadean]

I was so glad to see an update to this story ...
It has been an interesting look into what could have been, if John had left the boys with relatives rather than drag them round the country with him.
I have to admit that this Universe you've created intrigues me .. what will the dynamics between John and his boys be like since they aren't trained hunters and John has always been someone who only appeared in their lives occasionally? What kind of effect would their uncle's abuse have on them?
You've done a great job here and you have left me wanting much more.

[lifesscar]

Lmao, I was so glad to actually remember the CD so I could post it =X I've had this chapter written for... 2 weeks now? And yeah =x

that excites me so much that it intrigues you. Most of those questions will be answered in some degree with the last part. At the moment I'm working on how exactly I want to organize it so once that is figured out I'll be working on the final instalment.

THank you, <3

Kay

[kenzimone]

How creepy; I was sitting in class today when the memory of this fic struck me, and I wondered if there was ever going to be another update. =P

Glad to see this new chapter, only it's making me want more and more and more!

[lifesscar]

Ahaha, aww, I'm sorrythat it took me so long to get this chapter out.

Well, there's only one more chapter left but... =p

Thanks =D

[lifesscar]

Thanks =D Hopefully this last part won't take as long as this one did